Debt (fanfic)

This is an Axis Powers Hetalia fanfiction by Beatrice The Golden and Klei. In it, China is annoyed at America and England for not paying off their opium debt towards him.

So, China amputates America's arms and England's legs, rapes them, dresses them in maid's outfits and makes them clean the house with their tongues, rapes them again, tears their eyes out, rapes England through his socket, and (for a change of pace) rapes them some more.

That was the first chapter. It Got Worse.

Read it here, but it is holy shit NSFW.

It can essentially be considered the Hetalia equivalent of Agony in Pink.


 * Affably Evil: China.
 * Agony of the Feet: When in the maid's outfit, America has a needle that digs into his heel if he doesn't stay on his toes.
 * An Arm and a Leg: Type 3, preformed by China onto England and America.
 * The Atoner:
 * Author Appeal: Like Agony in Pink, this was intended to be read as porn.
 * Aw, Look -- They Really Do Love Each Other: All the nations are affected one way or another by America and England's absence, France and Canada especially so. Not that China would tell America or England...
 * Not only that, but
 * But You Screw One Goat!: Though it's more like "But you get raped by two dogs".
 * Cold-Blooded Torture: China does this over and over and over. He's not doing it for information, but for shits and giggles
 * Dark Fic: Oh, really?
 * Disproportionate Retribution: After all the shit China put America and England to, he's going to have to owe THEM money.
 * Dog Food Diet: America and England. However, they are doing it because they are forced, not because they're homeless.
 * Dull Surprise: The lack of exclamation marks kind of makes the screaming and begging for mercy come across this way.
 * Even Evil Has Standards: China balks at making America lick up his own vomit.
 * Eye Scream: America and England both get their eyes torn out by China. One wonders if he learned that trick from Pai Mei...
 * Later,
 * Fingore: China rips out England's fingernails (along with America's toenails) at one point.
 * Forced to Watch: England, the first time China rapes America.
 * Gorn: Dripping in it. Most notable in chapters one and twelve, but that's not to say other chapters are without it.
 * Great Escape: America and England attempt this twice. Key word being "attempt".
 * Hannibal Lecture: China gives them away to America and England like they were candy.
 * Heel Face Turn:
 * Heroic BSOD: France becomes a mopey sad sack after England is gone.
 * Hope Spot: Hong Kong appears to be this.
 * Hurt/Comfort Fic: Emphasis on the "hurt".
 * Impaled Palm:
 * Mind Rape: China inflicts the "mundane" sort upon his victims.
 * Mood Whiplash: Let's not even get started on the second half of the last chapter. In the words of one reviewer, it was like "having The Silence of the Lambs ending in a break dancing competition." This change in tone was not unwelcome, however.
 * Rape and Revenge:
 * Rape by Proxy: Used several times.
 * Revenge: China's motivation...or so he says, it's really just an excuse.
 * Sex Slave: America and England.
 * Stockholm Syndrome: Is in full effect here, much to France's horror when he finds out.
 * Throw The Dogs A Bone: On America's birthday, China bakes him a cake and takes the two of them out for walks in the park. He even gets hamburgers and tea for them.
 * China also gives them pet toys to play with, though it's insulting when you think about it.
 * Tongue Trauma: China takes out America and England's tongues in the third chapter.
 * What Beautiful Eyes!: Before tearing out thier eyes, China comments on how he almost envies the beauty of westerner's eyes.
 * Happens again when
 * China also gives them pet toys to play with, though it's insulting when you think about it.
 * Tongue Trauma: China takes out America and England's tongues in the third chapter.
 * What Beautiful Eyes!: Before tearing out thier eyes, China comments on how he almost envies the beauty of westerner's eyes.
 * Happens again when