The Uncharted Land

The Uncharted Land is an in-progress My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic fanfiction written by Blue Ridge Mountain Man.

After a Troll attack leaves Scootaloo orphaned, she is adopted by her hero and role model, Rainbow Dash. Rainbow then helps Scootaloo recover from the tragedy and get back on her hooves, and the pair grows closer than ever. In addition, Ponyville gets a new resident in famed disk jockey Vinyl Scratch, and she becomes fast friends with Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo, as well as the rest of the mane 6.

But what about the Troll that killed Scootaloo's parents? And does the attack have anything to do with the great Troll/Equestrian war that took place hundreds of years ago? And what is notorious Manehattan mobster Clyde Persano up to in Ponyville? Could he have anything to do with it?

A series of events unfolds that leads to Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Applejack, and Vinyl Scratch embarking on a heroic journey into the Troll homeland... the forbidden region north of Equestria known only to outsiders as The Uncharted Land.

The story underwent a major revision early on that resulted in it basically being restarted from scratch, with improved plot development, writing and characterization. It is currently in progress, with chapter V being the most recent addition, so stay tuned.


 * Anger Born of Worry: After Rainbow Dash saves Scootaloo from the Troll in chapter 2, she reveals her parental instinct by first chewing Scootaloo out, and then later admitting that she was worried sick.
 * Brooklyn Rage: Clyde Persano comes from Manehattan, the Equestria equivalent.
 * The Evil Prince: Whiteclaw, who killed his own father (or so he thinks) so he could take the throne and run the kingdom to his own liking.
 * Eyes of Gold: Whiteclaw has bright yellow eyes. Also, there's Gilda, who has a minor role.
 * The Good King: Redwood, former king of the Trolls.
 * Good Parents: Sunset and Raindrop were this to Scootaloo while they were alive.
 * Good Smoking, Evil Smoking: Clyde Persano, who is definitely in the evil half of this trope, smokes cigars.
 * Deadpan Snarker: Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, and Vinyl Scratch all have their moments of snark, especially Rainbow.
 * Disappointed in You: Rainbow Dash to Scootaloo, after saving her from a Troll that she hunted down in an attempt to earn her Cutie Mark.
 * Full Name Ultimatum: When Filthy Rich finds out that his daughter Diamond Tiara, he is none too happy and addresses her as "DIAMOND TIARA RICH!".
 * Happily Adopted: Rainbow Dash turns out to be the best adoptive mother Scootaloo could ever hope for.
 * Heroic Sacrifice:
 * Jerkass: Clyde Persano has a very unpleasant personality. There's also Diamond Tiara, of course....
 * The Ladette: Vinyl Scratch gives Rainbow Dash a run for her money in this fanfiction.
 * Light Is Not Good: Whiteclaw, a Troll with a coat of white fur, is the Big Bad.
 * Loan Shark: Clyde Persano is a particularly ruthless one.
 * The Mafia: Clyde Persano, a mobster from Manehattan.
 * Mama Bear: Rainbow Dash. Just ask Persano.
 * My God, What Have I Done?: Diamond Tiara has this reaction after.
 * Nightmare Sequence: Scootaloo has a particularly horrific one that involves.
 * Original Character: Several, most of them villains.
 * Orphan's Ordeal: Most of the beginning involves Scootaloo dealing with the deaths of her parents, and Rainbow Dash adopting her and helping her grieve and get back on her feet.
 * Our Trolls Are Different: In this case, they're sentient, highly intelligent creatures that are like a cross between a gorilla and a Tyrannosaurus Rex, with long retractable claws.
 * Parental Abandonment: The killing of Scootaloo's parents by a Troll kicks off the plot.
 * Pet the Dog: When Gilda comes across a newly-orphaned Scootaloo during an evening hunt, she drops everything to take Scootaloo to Rainbow Dash's house.
 * Red Eyes, Take Warning: Both played straight (with Clyde Persano) and averted (with Vinyl Scratch).
 * Roaring Rampage of Revenge: Something happened in Whiteclaw's past that filled him with a desire to commit genocide against the Equestrians.
 * Sir Swearsalot: Vinyl Scratch and Clyde Persano curse a lot more and more strongly than anybody else. Scootaloo's father Raindrop was also this, to the point that they got out a Swear Jar.
 * Taken for Granite: Celestia and Luna defeated Whiteclaw by sealing him in stone, much like how they handled Discord. However, the cave they were in collapsed shortly after his imprisonment, forcing them to leave him behind.
 * Would Hurt a Child: Clyde Persano, who