Three of Me: School Society/YMMV


 * Author's Saving Throw: The author wrote a pornographic chapter at one point, but deleted it very quickly.
 * Black Hole Sue: Razor Graze.
 * Designated Hero: Razor Graze doesn't come across as particularly sympathetic much of the time, and his friends tend not to be much better.
 * Eight Deadly Words: When the fic starts introducing OCs by the boatload, there's usually a dropoff in character development all around, and it leaves almost no one to actually care about.
 * Fan Dumb: While the fic does have its fans, and happens to be the second-most commented fic on FimFiction.Net, the absence of any sort of lasting story arc, shallow characterization, and Wanton Cruelty to The Common Comma turns off quite a few people from the story. It doesn't help that what fans it does have will viciously attack you if you DARE say anything even remotely negative about it.
 * God Mode Sue: Razor Graze, Mr. Charge, Shadow Blade, Dark Lightning... a good half of the OCs, really.
 * Jerk Sue: Mr. Charge, who beats up people quite harshly for no real reason and seems to have a sadistic streak, yet is beloved by Razor Graze and friends.
 * Love It or Hate It: There are just as many devotees as there are critics.
 * Relationship Sue: Many of the story's OCs, sent in by the story's reviewers, are paired with their favorite canon character.
 * Thirty Sue Pileup: All the OCs. It doesn't help that there's probably more than thirty if you count the consciences as separate characters.