Within and Without



Twilight Sparkle and her friends are approached by Princess Luna, who presents them with a set of questions:

"Did you ever stop to wonder what became of Trixie, Gilda and Blueblood after your encounters? What did these episodes truly mean to you? What role will they yet play in the lives of the Elements of Harmony? Last, are these questions as relevant as the journey towards the answers? Who will benefit from seeking these answers - you, them, or I?"

Originally written by Cloudy Skies in August-September 2011, Within and Without is a My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic fanfic that explores how the Mane Six confront these and other issues in an lengthy, emotionally-driven quest that spans all of Equestria. It was among the first My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic fics to blend well-written adventure narratives, character exploration and development, and shipping.

A revamped and expanded copy can be found here.


 * The Atoner: Luna.
 * Anguished Declaration of Love: From  to
 * Artifact of Doom: The Star Hammer.
 * Back From the Dead:
 * Belligerent Sexual Tension: Nowhere near as sexual as most shipping fics, but
 * Break the Haughty: Trixie gets the worst of it.
 * Brick Joke: Princess Longleap, Winter Sun, and the Somewhere Far Away epilogue.
 * Brought Down to Normal:.
 * Brutal Honesty: Applejack's blunt honesty and straightforward nature create several issues within the group.
 * Butt Monkey: Princess Longleap.
 * Cannot Spit It Out: Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, for similar reasons.
 * Call Back: Luna promises to give Dash anything she wants - with reason - as reward for going on the adventure.
 * The Chessmaster: Luna obviously has her own plans, and  has a hoof in how things play out.
 * The Chief's Daughter:
 * Clingy Jealous Girl: Rainbow Dash accuses Gilda of being like this.
 * Coming Out Story: Part of Rainbow Dash's character arc.
 * Cowardly Lion: Fluttershy is the only one brave enough to yell at Luna for her actions after Grey Hollows.
 * Dark Secret: Luna's reason for going on the adventure.
 * Death by Despair:
 * Determinator: Twilight goes to incredible lengths to
 * Doom Magnet: Winter Sun.
 * Driven to Suicide:
 * Dying Declaration of Love: Not quite dying, but
 * Dynamic Entry: Princess Celestia.
 * Earn Your Happy Ending: And how.
 * Eldritch Location:
 * Everyone Can See It: The connection and eventual romance between
 * Foreshadowing: All over the place, though Fluttershy's is the most subtle.
 * Hero Insurance: The more expensive aspects of the trip - especially property destruction - are paid by the royal treasury.
 * Hidden Depths: Fluttershy is the most experienced traveler of the Mane Six.
 * Hospitality for Heroes: Luna uses her planning and foresight to
 * I Don't Want to Ruin Our Friendship: Fluttershy thinks this will happen once her issues come to light.
 * Ineffectual Loner: Luna.
 * Insecure Love Interest:
 * Interrupted Intimacy: Twilight walks in on Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie early on. She's too oblivious to realize what's going on, though.
 * I Want My Beloved to Be Happy:
 * Keeping Secrets Sucks: Luna is the biggest offender, but everyone is hiding something. The emotional turmoil nearly breaks the group apart.
 * Love Redeems: Luna
 * Manipulative Bastard:
 * Mayfly-December Romance: Between
 * My Greatest Failure: Luna spends her nights
 * Mysterious Past: Luna tries to keep hers as hidden as possible.
 * Noble Savage: Brenliana.
 * No Hero Discount: Applejack, Rarity, and Luna handle the adventure's finances. Twilight didn't even think to bring money.
 * The Oathbreaker: Luna
 * Parental Abandonment:
 * Simpleminded Wisdom: Pinkie Pie is much wiser than she acts.
 * Please Don't Leave Me: Said almost word for word by
 * Polyamory:  Rarity calls it "terrifically modern."
 * Proud Warrior Race Guy: Many of the members of the griffin tribe.
 * Race For Your Love: Done literally between.
 * Rebellious Princess: Gilda.
 * Road Trip Romance: This story manages to combine a long adventure with a healthy dose of shipping.
 * Scenery Gorn:
 * Secret Keeper: Nearly everyone is keeping secrets from each other.
 * Luna deliberately withholds information on Blueblood just to get Rarity's attention. She also
 * Twilight
 * Applejack questions Luna's motives and overall personality, but not openly early on.
 * The Pinkie Pie Promise is used to prevent Pinkie from revealing her relationship with Rainbow Dash, despite it being obvious.
 * Rarity's insecurities about her future and sense of self-worth.
 * Fluttershy's
 * Despite appearing in only a couple of scenes, Princess Celestia
 * Secret Relationship: Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie think they have this, but fail miserably.
 * She Is Not My Girlfriend: Rainbow Dash is too afraid to publicly admit her feelings for Pinkie Pie until she's called out on it.
 * Shout-Out: As everyone is deciding whether or not to go on the adventure, Pinkie Pie states that it's dangerous to go alone.
 * Spanner in the Works: Luna underestimated
 * Standard Hero Reward: Played with. Before leaving, Rainbow Dash asks if they're going to get something for going on the adventure. Amused, Luna promises to give her anything she wants, as long as it is within reason.
 * Staring Down Cthulhu: Twilight's friends physically protect her from, despite knowing they could be killed.
 * Stop Helping Me!: Fluttershy has the  almost under control, but Dash's loud mouth ruins it.
 * The Not-Secret: Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie's romance. Despite their best efforts to keep it hidden, everyone except Twilight quickly picks up on it.
 * There Is Only One Bed: The rooming arrangements at the inns are occasionally problematic, often leading to development between certain characters.
 * Amusingly, Applejack chooses to stay with Pinkie Pie early on, hinting that Pinkie and Rainbow Dash would be too noisy if they shared a bed.
 * They're Called "Personal Issues" for a Reason: Luna frequently invokes this to keep Twilight from learning the truth.
 * The Storyteller: Trixie.
 * Torches and Pitchforks: Everyone in  really hates Luna.
 * Town with a Dark Secret: Grey Hollows.
 * Transparent Closet: Almost everyone knows Rainbow Dash loves Pinkie, yet Dash tries to keep it hidden.
 * Unrequited Tragic Maiden:
 * Wandering Minstrel: Trixie is a tragic version.
 * Weirdness Magnet: Winter Sun.
 * What Happened to the Mouse?: One of the driving questions of the adventure.
 * What the Hell, Hero?: Luna is on the receiving end of a few these.
 * Rainbow Dash gets a called out on a few of her mistakes as well.
 * Wham! Episode: The events at Grey Hollows, and
 * Who Wants to Live Forever?: Explored with as Luna comes to terms with her past mistakes.
 * Yes Mare: Twilight is often accused of being this for Celestia and Luna. She spends her character arc learning of her own self-worth in relation to the princesses.
 * You Are Not Alone: