Bugman Games

A webstory written by Solar Crimson. Completed since May 2009, and occasionally spruced up. Can be read here (though FictionPress messed with some of the formatting). It is the author's first completed serial story, as well as his first original story (he dabbled in fanfiction for several years beforehand).

The story begins with geeky student Thomas Kirkland mustering up the courage to ask out the rather popular and seemingly nice Melissa Cruz. She miraculously agrees, and the following Saturday Thomas travels to her house to pick her up. Little does he know that she has no intentions of letting him leave. Turns out, she only accepted his date request for more sinister purposes; brandishing a shrink ray, she shrinks Thomas and throw him inside of her closet with other captives. However, he is rescued by a rival faction of captives who also managed to escape from her closet and lives a rather hostile life within the house's walls. Their leader, the arrogant Bruce Black, promised a way out of the house and to freedom, but so far he has made no strides towards that goal.

The story takes on a more gruesome light when it is revealed that Melissa takes delight in torturing, maiming, and especially killing her small captives; she calls her twisted activities "Bugman Games", "Bugmen" being the name that she has given her shrunken captives. She is occasionally joined by the troubled Sayuko Takei, who reluctantly carries out Melissa's brutal wishes only to ensure that her brother Taro--who was shrunken weeks before the start of the story and is being held hostage by Melissa--remains unharmed.

Thomas must work with his comrades, and later Sayuko, to bring an end to Melissa's "games" and escape with their lives. The path to their goal will be filled with blood, sweat, and tears, but mostly blood.

The story was written with the size-changing crowd in mind, but the author believes that the story has enough literary merit to stand on its own. Whether those outside the original target audience agrees is up in the air.

It has a one-shot prequel story set some time before the events of the story called The Portal Project, chronicling another project by Melissa's father Edgar Cruz which does not work as expected; the story is rather old and slated to be rewritten to better fit with the author's current style. It also spawned a currently on-going spin-off called Hell Manor, which takes place a year after Bugman Games and in a different location; Hell Manor's Tina Yashiro takes Melissa's sadistic insanity and pumps it Up to Eleven.

"Melissa: You're nothing more than a bug now, an insignificant pest. I'm going to squish you. Byron: Oh, hell no!!"
 * Action Girl - Gloria.
 * Asian and Nerdy - Robbie, though not as much as his best friend Thomas. Robbie's girlfriend Kim also has shades of this.
 * Author Avatar - Thomas--in appearance (sans glasses), personality, and interests--could be seen as one for the author.
 * Berserk Button -.
 * Much earlier in the story, Melissa's button is pushed by a Homeless captive calling her a racial slur. She slaughters him, and then tells the others to use the right slur next time (the man called her the N-word, whereas she makes it a habit to point out that she is Dominican (but has strong African features)).
 * Beware the Nice Ones -
 * Bitch in Sheep's Clothing - Melissa.
 * Black and Nerdy - Thomas.
 * Black Best Friend / Sassy Black Woman - Lauren to Melissa.
 * Blackmail - Melissa is forcing Sayuko to partake in her gruesome hobby by holding her brother Taro hostage, and regularly threatens to kill him if she refuses to obey her. When you consider that Taro is all the family that she has left in the world, and she's willing to do anything for his safety...
 * Bonus Material - "Thomas' E-Journal".
 * Break the Cutie - What Melissa is doing to Sayuko.
 * Cold-Blooded Torture
 * Complete Monster - Melissa
 * Cracking The Fourth Wall - Happens during Robbie's and Dawson's conversation in Chapter 33.
 * Crowning Moment of Awesome -.
 * Crowning Moment of Heartwarming -.
 * Curb Stomp Battle - Dawson and Matt's battle against Isaac and Garet (no, not those two).
 * Daddy's Girl - Melissa adores her father..
 * Domestic Abuser - In Chapter 38, it's revealed that.
 * Dream Sequence - The beginning of Chapters 7 and 15; the latter of which involves Thomas and Melissa having a Pokémon battle, with them as the Pokemon.
 * Nightmare Sequence - Happens a few times, the most significant of which was Sayuko's nightmare in Chapter 28, which made her physically ill afterwards.
 * Catapult Nightmare
 * Driven to Suicide - The ultimate fate of.
 * Fetish Fuel - As noted earlier in the article, this story is aimed more towards people into size-changing scenarios. There is also quite a bit of content for those into feet (see below) and snuff.
 * Fan Disservice - The portion of Sayuko's nightmare involving the giant homeless men in Chapter 28. Unless you're into that.
 * Flash Back - Several times over the course of the story (in order: Dawson, Claudia, Bruce, Sayuko, and Thomas). The flashbacks are also told from the viewpoint of the person narrating them.
 * Foot Focus - In addition, both Dawson and Robbie have foot fetishes. Though Robbie's is more mild.
 * Jenna is barefoot when first introduced and for most of the story, but this is not a case of Does Not Like Shoes; she actually hates her feet and feet in general. She serves as a foil to Dawson's antics, and is actually introduced while servicing him and his fetish.
 * Giant Foot of Stomping / Trampled Underfoot
 * Gone Horribly Wrong - What happens in the prequel story The Portal Project.
 * Gorn
 * Heroic BSOD - Carlos suffers one after.
 * Heroic Sacrifice -
 * Idiot Savant - Reagan. Also counts as a Chuck Cunningham Syndrome, as he is never spoken of again afterwards.
 * I Kiss Your Foot - Either forced or voluntarily.
 * I'm a Humanitarian - Involuntary example: Melissa forces Sayuko to eat four of the small captives in Chapter 20.
 * As mentioned by Gloria, Melissa once attempted this, but vomited almost immediately afterwards, and then vowed to herself to never do it again.
 * Incredible Shrinking Man
 * Infant Immortality -.
 * Jerkass - Ray and Bruce.
 * Starting with Ray,
 * In Bruce's case,
 * - Lampshaded by Thomas in Chapter 38.
 * Killed Off for Real -
 * Laughing Mad -.
 * Mad Scientist - Edgar may qualify. Implied in the epilogue.
 * Missing Mom - Melissa tells Thomas that her mother ran out on her and her father when she was young..
 * Moral Event Horizon - Melissa crossed this a long time ago. Specifically,
 * Narm - One instance in Chapter 28: Before Melissa kills Byron:
 * Missing Mom - Melissa tells Thomas that her mother ran out on her and her father when she was young..
 * Moral Event Horizon - Melissa crossed this a long time ago. Specifically,
 * Narm - One instance in Chapter 28: Before Melissa kills Byron:


 * Nerds Are Virgins - Thomas..
 * Prank Date - How Melissa traps Thomas, and assumably her other captives.
 * Prequel - The Portal Project to this story, which is actually removed from the plot aside from some references.
 * Punctuated Pounding - Jenna does this to Dawson in Chapter 12.
 * Scary Black Man - Bruce
 * Sequel Hook
 * Shout-Out - A couple:
 * In Chapter 24, Dawson and Matt fight against two Homeless prisoners named Isaac and Garet, named after two of the protagonists of the game Golden Sun.
 * The very final scene (and perhaps the scene before it) of the story is a reference to the cliffhanger ending of Fire Emblem [Blazing Sword].
 * Shrinking Violet - Sayuko is a shy young woman, and has been that way for her entire life.
 * Shrink Ray - Melissa uses one to shrink her victims.
 * Sick Episode - Chapter 29. Poor Sayuko....
 * Slobs Versus Snobs - Respectively, the Homeless and the Refugees. The Refugees are people who were lured to Melissa's house and shrunken; they are mostly young adults and mostly male, and they managed to escape from Melissa's closet and live inside of her house's walls, hence their name. The Homeless are exactly what they sound like; they were captured directly from the streets under the cloak of night. The Refugees managed to escape from Melissa's closet and create some sort of interconnected network within Melissa's walls, while the Homeless were left trapped inside of the closet. The Refugees look down upon the Homeless, while the Homeless despise the Refugees' arrogance.
 * Spin-Off - The story Hell Manor; its events are alluded to in the epilogue of Bugman Games.
 * Invisible to Gaydar - Shawn.
 * The Stool Pigeon -.
 * Sugar and Ice Personality - Gloria.
 * Turncoat -.
 * The War Sequence - The majority of Chapter 31, which finally pits the Refugees and the Homeless against one another..
 * The Woobie - Sayuko. She is a shy young woman who suffers the loss of her parents in a drunk driving accident, and is then brought to America to live with her brother. Then, he gets kidnapped and shrunken by Melissa, and held as a hostage to make Sayuko participate in Melissa's gruesome hobby (which she reluctantly participates in because she loves her brother very much). The whole ordeal takes its toll on her; she closes herself off from others, her grades at school drop, and she can barely sleep and when she does she tends to suffer from nightmares that physically make her ill afterwards. ..
 * Your Cheating Heart - Bruce and, and, in.
 * Your Cheating Heart - Bruce and, and, in.