Naruto Veangance Revelaitons/YMMV

Only the men]]), fans of modern music, fans of western animation, and most of all, critics. No one agrees, though. appearance. Ronan has a six inch body, twenty eight foot biceps, blue hair and a penis that can go from two to forty five feet in length. Imagine this giant phallus chasing you down with giant arms waving over it's tiny patch of blue hair, the whole time yelling badly spelled gibberish and obscenities. watching this thing chasing someone, though the one being chased might not see the humor...or they might die from busting a gut. This troper, just in reading the above description, cannot stop laughing. one-dimensionally evil strawmen who represent everything the author hates, or are they fighting for the rights of those the author hates, only to [[He Who Fights Monsters tragically succumb to their own biases and persecute those they disagree with]]? announcement that the author was wrapping it up. Ronan get his comeuppance]]. begging for their lives. Yeah, well, it's first mentioned he'll do this in Chapter 16. He doesn't actually do it until Chapter 65. While in a [[Sarcasm Mode well written]] story, this would be a nice case of Foreshadowing and the author having planned things out, in this fic, you could cut out most of the chapters in between those two and you wouldn't lose much. when he moved to Konoha from elsewhere. not, since it seems like the author decided to rip off a concept from Bleach. include everyone who likes modern music being put to death "in less they r hot chicks", and outlaws homosexuality and religion. In the next chapter, he changes the sentence to life imprisonment for modern music fans (but keeps the death penalty for every modern musician except himself and Sakura), and allows gay people to have sex in their homes but not so much as kiss in public, in response to reviewer complaints about him being intolerant. The chapter after that, Ronan changes the sentence to life imprisonment for modern musicians, and while he orders churches to be bulldozed, says that people can pray in their homes. Mist go from legendary warriors to Mooks. dream and is a BLAM by the author's admission. "Author's Note: dis chsptr might b a bit weord i cudnt tink of"
 * Acceptable Targets: Religious people, homosexuals ([[Girl On Girl Is Hot
 * Accidental Nightmare Fuel:
 * From the authors descriptions we can deduce the character's
 * Giant shapeshifting phallus.
 * Alternatively may count as a Crowning Moment of Funny when one is
 * Alternative Character Interpretation: Is the Council a group of
 * And the Fandom Rejoiced:
 * Perhaps the only well-received development in this fic was the
 * [[spoiler:Then Benji released his ending, and readers enjoyed seeing
 * Anticlimax Boss: The Council. When Ronan reaches them, they start
 * Arc Fatigue: You know the whole thing about Ronan destroying the world?
 * Ass Pull: Repeatedly, especially Ronan being godson of the Shinobi King
 * The Shinobi King himself might count as an ass pull, fanfic or
 * Authors Saving Throw: Ronan's first decrees as King of the Shinobi
 * Badass Decay: Everyone from canon. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the
 * Big Lipped Alligator Moment: The beach episode, which may or may not be a

muc so it dusnt ha much 2 d wot skura mdra sasuke da coincil nd utff! are around six characters from canon who appear more than once, all horribly out of character, compared to over a dozen recurring original characters. Early on, none of the canon settings were referred to by name, and in Chapter 6, the rest of Team 7 was killed off (although they eventually came back) and Orochimaru was forgotten about. Chapters in the middle of the fic, including when Ronan travels spoiler:looking for a cure for Sakura aren't quite as bad as the early story, but are still decidedly In Name Only. in canon, although he also becomes a fundamentalist Christian in the process. normal selves and kill Ronan]]. the case that]] it's intentional, it falls under Troperrific instead. anyone criticizes him. Naruto's anger toward him is indicated as being because he believes Ronan is better than he is, as he constantly reminds us. [[Alternate Character Interpretation Most of the readers think otherwise.]] had nukes dropped on it in World War I. disregarding the fact that Sakura is flat-chested in canon, bra sizes do not go that high, and double letters indicate smaller breasts (as AA is smaller than A). as horrible as Ronan does. off as reasonable in comparison to Ronan. Our Lemon". Sasuke and Kakashi also get this treatment. spoiler:it takes Sakura getting brainwashed for him to get together with her In it, Ronan is having sex with his harem in public when a gay man comes up and comments on his large penis. Ronan freaks out and kills him just for admiring it. While it could be just barely justified as Paedo Hunt under Jake's bizarre logic, it mainly just comes off as monstrous. good part of the story. people who not only opposes Ronan, but calls him out for being a jerk. defeated, but spoiler:Ronan has destroyed the rest of the world in the process and charged Ekaj and Atni with repopulating the world with people like him; one Ronan was already bad enough. she's on Ronan's side and when she's on Madara's, but around the time the author broke up with his girlfriend, spoiler:leading to Taliana's death, Taliana is described as "ugly". this fic, they're so poorly written and described there's no way the scenes featuring them could ever turn you on. sweet merciful [[Body Horror GOD,]] the ''fucking sex scenes!'' kidnapping Ronan?s friends repeatedly. At least Madara was working for the Council and had some side ventures. female and. Edfred, and he is supposed to come off as a Jerkass. However... unforgivable, but the author doesn't consider them as such. However, the President of the Kibusi Corporation offers an arguably straight example when he spoiler:kills most of the Land of Earth for not being suitable for doing business in. all homosexuals. Even Ronan finds this appalling. killed off (the second time). But then, he somehow came back again, and spoiler: was on the side of the bad guys... before being killed off. AGAIN. faintest hint of sympathy or redeeming characteristics, and is said to be fat and ugly. watersports, farting, barfing, scat, and genital mutilation? "fuking hot". Two guys even kissing? "EW WTF NO IM NUT A FAG DATS SO GROSA!!1!!!!11!" On a lesser scale, the author and Ronan also disapprove of necrophilia. and usually leading to Fridge Logic, [[Fridge Horror Fridge Horror]], and major Squick. scenes or offended by the author (and thus Ronan's) ideology disagree. liked, Ronan stands out in how widely he is hated for his repulsive personality and Marty Stu nature. disliking Ronan. often justifiably irritated or angry, but comes off as an abusive jerk. it's unclear at what point in the story this takes place, his being able to defeat Orochimaru and Madara with little effort easily qualifies him as one. fits the Lemon Stu trope so well in fact, you could easily retitle "Lemon Stu" as "The Ronan". take his score on [The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test], which was administered by Benji himself (the person who probably knows the most about Ronan besides Jake). If your character scores 50+, it's recommended you just scrap them. Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way's score was 195. Ronan's? 314. spoiler:after Mandy is killed and Taliana turns evil, it's Ronan, Sakura and da cooger, then after da cooger's death, she is replaced by Etni/Atni. Orochimaru. Their attempts to defeat Ronan routinely fail and cause them to lose all credibility as threats. unlike many fanfics, he repeatedly gets called out for it and is meant to be unsympathetic). Jake is also prone to doing this during his Author's Notes, and on his twitter account. her enemies, often gets physical and emotional abuse from Ronan, and is treated like property in and out of bed. One could argue that she brings much of it on herself by sticking around Ronan, but this is disproven when spoiler:in Benji's ending, it is revealed that she had been placed under a genjutsu all along. Said ending also implies she has some permanent psychological scars from her experience.
 * Canon Defilement: Taken to My Immortal extremes. There
 * Character Rerailment:
 * To some extent, Sasuke becoming evil for the sake of Revenge like
 * [[spoiler:In Benji's ending, all the characters are returned to their
 * Cliche Storm: Oh lord.... just look at it. However, [[Poes Law in
 * Creators Pet: Ronan is described as a great character, and hardly
 * Critical Research Failure:
 * As part of his claim to know Japanese history, Jake says that Japan
 * The author describes Sakura as having "double L cup" breasts. Even
 * Designated Hero: Ronan. Dear GOD, RONAN.
 * Designated Villain:
 * Orochiblahblah and Magora are this, despite not doing anything nearly
 * The author wants readers to consider Edfred a jerk, although he comes
 * Die for Our Ship:
 * This happens to Naruto.... twice. Though it's more like "Die For
 * Sasuke also gets treated this way, especially considering that
 * Dude Not Funny:
 * The treatment of anyone Jake doesn't like when portrayed as funny.
 * The biggest example of this trope, however, is probably chapter 11.
 * Ending Aversion: Inverted. Benji's ending is widely seen as the only
 * Ensemble Darkhorse / Crowning Moment of Awesome: Edfred, one of the few
 * Esoteric Happy Ending: The (arguably more) evil Council has been
 * Evil Is Sexy: Zig-zagged with Taliana. She's described as sexy both when
 * Fetish Retardant: Even if you had any of the fetishes featured in
 * High Octane Nightmare Fuel: The sex scenes. Dear,
 * Generic Doomsday Villain: Orochimaru has no real plan except for
 * Les Yay: Between the two females of the Council, and between the German
 * Misaimed Fandom: According to the author, we are not supposed to like
 * Moral Event Horizon: Ronan does several things that would be considered
 * The Council cements their status as being evil by planning on killing
 * Ron the Death Eater:
 * This was what appeared to be happening to Naruto, before he was
 * Sasuke is not only completely evil, but is also portrayed without the
 * Selective Squick: Girl on girl, milking breasts,
 * Shocking Swerve: Numerous, always feeling like ass pulls,
 * So Bad Its Good: For some. But others who are Squicked by the sex
 * The Scrappy: While none of the characters except Edfred are very well
 * Straw Man Has a Point: Edfred comes off as completely reasonable in
 * Thirty Sue Pileup:
 * Jerk Sue: AND HOW!
 * Tsundere Sue: Is supposed to be seen as a loving boyfriend who is
 * Black Hole Sue: The entire story revolves around him and his actions.
 * God Mode Sue: Ronan is more powerful than all of Team 7 combined. While
 * Mary Tzu
 * Relationship Sue: It's more about the sex, though.
 * Mary Sue Classic
 * Lemon Stu: Ronan is in love with this trope. Ronan
 * To give one an idea of just how much of a Stu Ronan is, let's
 * One True Threesome: First Ronan with Sakura, Mandy and Taliana, then
 * Take That Scrappy:.
 * Villain Decay: Both compared to canon and in-story for Madara and
 * Wangst: Naruto from his return to the story until his death, (but
 * The Woobie: Sakura. She gets raped countless times, by Ronan and