Special:Badtitle/NS90:Forum:Writer's Workshop/Some feedback on my Creepypasta?/reply

Wow, that was some creepy shit.

Needs a good spell check, but the story structure seems strong. Love how you paced things getting more and more freaky and insane.

I have no idea what the overused horror is you're referring to (I don't follow creepypasta a lot), but what your protagonist (characterization for him is great, don't change it) goes through is definitely Bring My Brown Pants worthy.