"Sorry", Brom apologized
The "'Az Ragni' means, 'The River.' It has never once been called anything but 'The Az Ragni'.
Report on Probability A by Brian W Aldiss appears to be based almost exclusively on this trope, to the point of unreadability. The description in Wikipedia says: "The bulk of the book is the Report, describing in minute, obsessive and often repetitive detail, three characters G, S, and C as they secretly watch a house, each from a separate outbuilding with peripheral views of the house's windows, catching occasional glimpses of its occupant, Mrs Mary. As the Report is being read by a character called "Domoladossa'", he is secretly being observed from other universes, and these observers in their turn are being observed, all of them engaged in futile speculation about the exact nature of Probability A, and the exact meaning of the Victorian painting, The Hireling Shepherd (by Pre-Raphaelite William Holman Hunt..." (and so on)
The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. "Hey, have you any idea what these strange symbols are?" "I think they're just strange symbols of some kind," said Zaphod, hardly glancing back.
In the Animorphs book The Ellimist Chronicles, when Ellimist realizes Aguella's pheromoning at him, and wonders why him: "Aguella could have any male she wanted. She was beautiful, well formed, sturdy, intelligent, funny, beautiful, very beautiful. That was several too many 'beautifuls', I said to myself."
While he drove, Uncle Vernon complained to Aunt Petunia. He liked to complain about things: people at work, Harry, the council, Harry, the bank and Harry were just a few of his favourite subjects. This morning, it was motorbikes.
The Bible. "So God created man in his own image, in the image of God created he him; male and female created he them. Gen 1:27" (Why do you think Monty Python did this in the Holy Hand Grenade scene?)
Also in Genesis 10:8-9 (NIV) "Cush was the father of Nimrod, who grew to be a mighty warrior on the earth. He was a mighty hunter before the Lord; that is why it is said, 'Like Nimrod, a mighty hunter before the Lord.'" Other versions are also redundant, just not as blatantly so.
Later scholars found justifications for at least some of these. In one tradition, Genesis 22:2, "Take your son, your only son(often translated as "favored one"), whom you love, Issac..." was necessary because Abraham loved both of his sons.
This is an exceptionally common style of writing in the Bible, known in Hebrew poetry as 'tikbolet' or parallels. The redundancy is used as a poetic device in the original.
The Book of Mormon is even worse: 1 Nephi 9:2: "... for the plates upon which I make a full account of my people I have given the name of Nephi; wherefore, they are called the plates of Nephi, after mine own name; and these plates also are called the plates of Nephi."
The Bible just in general has a lot of stuff along the lines of: "And God told them to go and do (insert action here). And so they went and did (insert action here). And God was pleased that they had done (insert action here). And so God told the people 'I am pleased that you have done (insert action here).'"
Some passages seem more redundant than they are simply because of how they're translated. Take the case of the death of Achan. "And all Israel stoned him with stones, and burned them with fire, after they stoned them with stones." The Hebrew, while not removing the redundancy, kicks it back a notch, using two different words for the action of stoning: vayir'g'mu vs. vayis'q'lu. Not to mention that the word for the stones themselves (even (sing.); avanim (pl.)) look almost nothing like either of them.
Proverbs 16:22 "Prudence is a fountain of life to the prudent, but folly brings punishment to fools."
The Haggadah, the prayerbook used at the Jewish holiday of Passover, can get pretty bad at points. The first of these three quotes are also part of a rather lengthy segment alternating between short paragraphs and long paragraphs that reiterate each sentence of the short paragraph with a longer explanation, which also might qualify, and all come from the same paragraph.
And we cried unto the Eternal, the God of our fathers: as it is said, and it came to pass, after some time, that the king of Egypt died, and the children of Israel sighed in consequence of the bondage, and they cried, and their complaint went up to God, in consequence of the bondage.
And He saw our affliction: this denotes the separation from their wives, as it is said, and God saw the children of Israel, and God had knowledge of their affliction.
And our oppression: this denotes the severity employed, as it is said, And I have also seen the oppression wherewith the Egyptians oppress them.
Dave Barry Turns 50 has a list of "10 Signs That You Might Be Losing It." Number 1: "You tend to forget things." Number 6: "You tend to forget things." Number 10: "You tend to forget things."
Dave Barry declares in "The Columnist's Caper": "I have written a suspense novel. It has everything. Sex. Violence. Sex. Death. Russians. Dead Russians."
Due to being a town in a contested area between two cultures with very different languages, the river crossing of Bengloarafurd Ford in the Dragaera universe has a name that roughly translates to "Ford ford ford ford".
In Mostly Harmless: "Anything that happens, happens. Anything that, in happening, causes something else to happen, causes something else to happen. Anything that, in happening, causes itself to happen again, happens again. It doesn't necessarily do it in chronological order, though."
From So Long And Thanks For All The Fish: "Beyond what used to be known as the Limitless Lightfields of Flanux until the Grey Binding Fiefdoms of Saxaquine were discovered lying behind them, lie the Grey Binding Fiefdoms of Saxaquine."
Everywhere was dark, dark darkness. Blackness. Black. Black blackness.
Most of Fanthorpe's So Bad It's Good work for Badger Books, in fact. He was being paid by the word, after all. Hence the popular UK SF scene Light Bulb Joke: "How many Fanthorpe pseudonyms does it take to change a lightbulb, to replace it, to reinstate it, to substitute for it, to swap it, to exchange it, to renew it, to put another in its stead, to ..."
The most famous Fanthorpian example is probably Chapter 5 of March of the Robots, which, when all the redundancy has been removed, just says "A saucer-shaped ship landed silently, while the people were still asleep. Mysterious robots marched out of it, and a force-field appeared around it."
"Metal things. Metal things that could think. Thinking metal things."
She could tell the real man in front of her wanted her, because he told her so. "I want you," he whispered.
In Discworld, a tourist misreads his Agatean-to-Morporkian translation guide, leading to such statements as:
Twoflower: I wish for an accommodation, a room, lodgings, the lodging house, full board, are your rooms clean, a room with a view, what is your rate for one night?
and
Twoflower: Fooood. Yes. Cutlet, hash, chop, stew, ragout, fricassee, mince, collops, souffle, dumpling, blancmange, sorbet, gruel, sausage, not to have a sausage, beans, without a bean, kickshaws, jelly, jam. Giblets. Innkeeper: All that?
Also used to parody buzzwords in self-workplace-help-empowerment-etc. books with How to Dynamically Manage People for Dynamic Results in a Caring Empowering Way in Quite a Short Time Dynamically, which Ponder Stibbons assumed (in light of the redundancy) had been stitched together from quite a few books on the subject.
In Ankh-Morpork, there's a bridge called Pons Bridge, pons being Latin for... bridge. (sing. obj. nom.)
DON'T ARSK US ABOUT:
rocks
troll's with sticks
All sorts of dragons
Mrs Cake
Huje green things with teeth
Any kinds of black dogs with orange eyebrows
Rains of spaniel's
fog.
Mrs Cake
From Twilight, Book the First: "Traitor tears were there, betraying me."
Also, "Aro started to laugh. "Ha ha ha", he chuckled." (From Twilight, Book the Second.)
In the third book Bella tells us that vampires are part of a "clandestine world full of myths and monsters that existed secretly."
At some point mentions Edward's "Relaxed calm".
In the Women of the Otherworld novel Bitten by Kelley Armstrong, there is this line, which is also in another of Kelley Armstrong's works, namely Bitten, which is first in the series Women of the Otherworld, by Kelley Armstrong.
Antonio lifted a hand and started counting off reasons on his fingers. "One, he used to be Pack so he knows how dangerous this kind of killing on our territory is, that we can't--and won't--leave town. Two, he hates Clay. Three, he hates Jeremy. Four, he hates all of us--with the exception of our dear Elena, who, conveniently, wasn't at Stonehaven to be affected by the mess, which I'm sure Daniel knew. Five, he really hates Clay. Six--oh, wait, other hand--six, he's a murderous cannibalizing bastard. Seven, did I mention he chose to strike when Elena wasn't around? Eight, if he caused enough havoc, Elena might be in the market for a new partner. Nine, he really, really, REALLY hates Clay. Ten, he's sworn undying revenge against the entire Pack, particularly those two members who happen to be currently living at Stonehaven. I'm out of fingers here, buddy. How many more reasons do you need?"
The Darkest Road, by Guy Gavriel Kay.
"Forgive me," he said. "I am a fool and a fool and a fool."
"At least two of those," Torc agreed gravely.
Not to mention earlier, in The Summer Tree: "Rain, rain, rain, rain, rain." Kay repeats words or phrases for dramatic effect many times during this trilogy, sometimes devastatingly well (i.e. "And this was the X night of Pwyll the Stranger on the Summer Tree") - buuuuuut on the other hand, sometimes he overdoes it a bit.
Hank the Cowdog series. "Dust and hay and flakes of dried manure swirled through the air, filling my eyes and nose and mouth with dust and hay and flakes of dried manure that swirled through the air."
All that Syrio Forel had taught her went racing through her head. Swift as a deer. Fear cuts deeper than swords. Quick as a snake. Calm as still water. Fear cuts deeper than swords. Strong as a bear. Fierce as a wolverine. Fear cuts deeper than swords. The man who fears losing has already lost. Fear cuts deeper than swords. Fear cuts deeper than swords. Fear cuts deeper than swords.
They were quite regularly gay there, Helen Furr and Georgine Skeene, they were regularly gay there where they were gay. They were very regularly gay. To be regularly gay was to do every day the gay thing that they did every day. To be regularly gay was to end every day at the same time after they had been regularly gay. They were regularly gay. They were gay everyday. They ended every day in the same way, at the same time, and they had been everyday quite regularly gay.
Quite a fewevery book by Gary Paulsen will repeat itself to no end.
In the Star Wars novel Death Star, Memah Roothes, the new cantina owner, and her bouncer are required to do two physical exam sessions. Memah cites this trope as the reason they have to.
that may not have been a reference--the Galactic Empire had an actual Department of Redundancy Department. Nobody seems quite sure whether it actually had a serious job, or Palpatine was feeling whimsical when he created it, so different authors will treat it differently.
In Infinite Jest, one of the locations is a drug and alcohol addiction recovery house called Ennet House Drug and Alcohol Recovery House[1], where people go to recover from drug and alcohol addictions in the drug and alcohol recovery house. House.
Fallen by Thomas Sniegowski is absolutely ridiculous with this. One example, "I don't know" he said uncertainly. Made worse by the fact that he thanks the 'termineditor' in his foreword. One shudders to think what the book was like before she got to it.
In the first section of 1985, Anthony Burgess refers, apparently without sarcasm, to "the gay homosexuals."
There is an RL Stine book in the Fear Street series called Final Grade. The blurb on the back of the book reads "Lily is drawn into a nightmare she can't begin to control. Will her final grade be her last?" Um.. yes?
Dave Barry's Book of Bad Songs includes lists sent in by a long-time professional musician of the ten most hated requested songs of Top 40 bands and wedding bands. The title "Stairway to Heaven" is listed 5 times in the former (and "Proud Mary" is listed twice), and "New York, New York" is listed 4 times in the latter (including "New York, New York, and I'm the Bride's Father and I Have Your Check Right Here in my Hand So You Better Play It, Dammit").
Because ancient tales were oral, many of the classics reuse the same descriptions over and over to help the story teller out. When listening or reading the Iliad, by the third ox sacrifice you are going "yes yes, we know how the ox is sacrificed and burnt and made to smell sweet, get on with the story."
Averted in Nordic sagas "Seven Viking Romances". Heroes will boast about what they will do, before fulfilling it- bigger boast, bigger kudos. To avoid the skald having to repeat his story telling there will be lines like "Eric said he would do x, y and z. So that's what he did.
In one version of Baba Yaga:
Nearly scared to death from fear, they lay there, afraid to talk, afraid even to breathe.
This is a problem with many translations of the Popol Vuh, since the original poetry relies on redundancy and parallelism as a poetic tool. However, this translates very badly to modern day prose, leading to sections such as:
"The fourth trial is named the Bat House, for there are none but bats inside. In this house they squeek. They shriek as they fly about in the house, for they are captive bats and cannot come out."
In Winnie the Pooh, there's a "box of paints to paint things with".
And the NORTH POLE. DICSOVERED BY POOH. POOH FOUND IT.
The nursery rhyme "The Grand Old Duke Of York":
Oh, the grand old duke of York
He had ten thousand men
He marched them up to the top of the hill
And he marched them down again.
And when they were up, they were up,
And when they were down, they were down,
And when they were only halfway up they were neither up nor down.
In Tour of the Merrimack, one Marine motto is, "Redundancy is good. Redundancy is good. Redundancy is good."
The Guinness World Records book for 2003 lists all the video game consoles made by Sony for the record of greatest market share in global gaming as the Playstation, PS One, and Playstation 2. PS One is another term for the Playstation.
Hans Christian Andersen's The Emperor's Nightingale has a lovely (slightly insensitive) example in its opening lines:
In China, you know, the emperor is a Chinese, and all those about him are Chinamen also.
It was a cashier's check for $2,750 drawn on the Grangers Trust Co. of Topeka, Kansas, to a man named Marshall Purvis. I said, "This is a cashier's check for $2,750 drawn on the Grangers Trust Co. of Topeka, Kansas, to a man named Marshall Purvis."
A pretty common gag in the narration usually runs something like this:
[Thought]. 'Jeeves,' I said, '[repeat thought].'
In "Jeeves Takes Charge", Bertie is referred to as a "spineless invertebrate".
"Jeeves and the Yule-tide Spirit":
'Touching on that matter we were touching on, Jeeves ...'
Thank You, Jeeves:
'Well, damn it, whereabouts in the garden did whoever merely informed you that he was in the garden merely inform you that he was?'
Henderson the Rain King by Saul Bellow: "In an age of madness, to expect to be untouched by madness is a form of madness. But the pursuit of sanity can be a form of madness, too."
