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This is an ''[[Axis Powers Hetalia]]'' fanfiction by Beatrice The Golden and Klei. In it, China is annoyed at America and England for not paying off their opium debt towards him.
 
So, China amputates America's arms and England's legs, rapes them, dresses them in maid's outfits and makes them clean the house with their tongues, rapes them again, tears their eyes out, rapes England through his socket, and (for a change of pace) rapes them some more.
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That was the first chapter. [[It Got Worse]].
 
Read it [http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6468633/1/bDebt_b here]{{dead link}}, but it is ''holy shit'' [[NSFW]].
 
It can essentially be considered the Hetalia equivalent of ''[[Agony Inin Pink]]''.
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* [[Affably Evil]]: China.
* [[Agony of the Feet]]: When in the maid's outfit, America has a needle that digs into his heel if he doesn't stay on his toes.
* [[An Arm and Aa Leg]]: Type 3, preformed by China onto England and America.
* [[The Atoner]]: {{spoiler|Hong Kong.}}
* [[Author Appeal]]: Like ''[[Agony Inin Pink]]'', this was intended to be read as porn.
* [[Aw, Look -- They Really Do Love Each Other]]: All the nations are affected one way or another by America and England's absence, France and Canada especially so. [[Kick the Dog|Not that China would tell America or England...]]
** Not only that, but {{spoiler|after England and America are freed, both France and Canada take care of them.}}
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* [[Dog Food Diet]]: America and England. However, they are doing it because they are forced, not because they're homeless.
* [[Dull Surprise]]: The lack of exclamation marks kind of makes the screaming and begging for mercy come across this way.
* {{spoiler|[[Earn Your Happy Ending]]: More of "Endure years of torture for your happy ending."}}
* [[Even Evil Has Standards]]: China balks at making America lick up his own vomit.
* [[Eye Scream]]: America and England both get their eyes torn out by China. One wonders if he learned that trick from [[Kill Bill|Pai Mei]]...
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* [[Hope Spot]]: Hong Kong appears to be this.
** {{spoiler|Subverted-he actually sets America and England free.}}
* [[Hurt /Comfort Fic]]: Emphasis on the "hurt".
* [[Impaled Palm]]: {{spoiler|While Russia is torturing him, China tries to grab the knife Russia was using and stab him with it. Unsurprisingly, he fails, and winds up with this instead.}}
* [[Mind Rape]]: China inflicts the "mundane" sort upon his victims.
* [[Mood Whiplash]]: Let's not even get started on the second half of the last chapter. In the words of one reviewer, it was like "having ''[[The Silence of the Lambs]]'' ending in a break dancing competition." [[Hilarity Ensues|This change in tone was not unwelcome, however.]]
* [[Rape and Revenge]]: {{spoiler|The former from China to America and England, the latter from Russia to China.}}
* [[Rape Byby Proxy]]: Used several times.
* [[Revenge]]: China's motivation...or so he says, it's really just an excuse.
* [[Sex Slave]]: America and England.
* [[Stockholm Syndrome]]: Is in full effect here, much to France's horror when he finds out.
* [[Throw the Dog Aa Bone|Throw The Dogs A Bone]]: On America's birthday, China bakes him a cake and takes the two of them out for walks in the park. He even gets hamburgers and tea for them.
** China also gives them pet toys to play with, though it's insulting when you think about it.
* [[Tongue Trauma]]: China takes out America and England's tongues in the third chapter.
* [[What Beautiful Eyes!]]: Before tearing out thier eyes, China comments on how he almost envies the beauty of westerner's eyes.
** Happens again when {{spoiler|Russia says that he admires China's eyes, and China's recent actions hadn't changed that. Then Russia rips out one of China's eyes, saying that bad people didn't deserve beautiful eyes.}}
 
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