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The story follows two points of view. Ana/Anna and Woe's (sonicluvr) and Ryan's (Pie)
sonicluvr's story starts with Woe, who is assumed to be an orphaned hedgehog because the story constantly mention his parents dying (or dyeing their hair?) in front of his very eyes. He's basically a [[Palette Swap]] of Sonic. Woe catches the bus and meets a girl named Ana (or Anna or Annna), who is a beautiful girl who has been revealed using a couple slips to be sonicluvr's [[Self Insert]]. Suddenly, Master Hand attacks the bus ([[Department of Redundancy Department|with his hand]]), but is killed by Woe, who expresses his love for Anna. Then they go through school, learning their attacks. Over time, the two are subject to [[Crossover|crossovers]], [[
Pie's story is a lot less cryptic than sonicluvr's work. It follows a girl named Ryan who is unemployed and has to support her [[Dysfunctional Family|lazy father and the rest of her family]]. After catching her brother Shirley [[A Date With Rosie Palms|whacking it]] to [[Perverse Sexual Lust|Peach's underwear]], Ryan is mysteriously [[Trapped in TV Land|sucked into the game]]. She tries to escape, but is mistaken for an escaped student. She attends the school, giving a clearer point of view to whatever sonicluvr writes.
The difference in writing ability could not last forever, though. By Chapter 12, Diabolical Pie couldn't take the lackluster writing ability of her friend, and the [[Fanfic]] exploded into full Civil War between the writers. Now we'll see whether this [[Fanfic]] can be salvaged into something semi-decent, or be condemned into the pit of terrible writing (though it could be [[So Bad
Read it [http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3449645/sonicluvr242 here].
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* [[Back From the Dead]]: Woe is apparently still alive, according to the author annoncement after Chapter 11.
** It was revealed in Chapter 14 that Woe's death was also part of Ryan's dream. There's no foreshadowing whatsoever for this point, and it's not even explained in the narrative (only through an author's note).
* [[Beam Me Up, Scotty]]: In Chapter 14, sonicluvr claims that Sun Tzu (spelled Sun ZOO) said, ""Tha show must go on regadless of war...". [[Did Not Do the Research|Apparently, according to her, Sun Tzu was also Egyptian]].
* [[Bond Villain Stupidity]]: Robot Zombie Colins successfully manages to ambush the heroes. Instead of attempting to, you know, ''kill them'', he says that he will make Woe so angry that Woe will get a Smash Ball attack and then attack him in single combat. Of course, that's what usually happens with this trope in effect, but never with the villain [[Enforced Trope|deliberately doing it]].
* [[Big Bad]]: Possibly Robot Zombie Collins, since he claims to return. But since this fic is completely bananas, this could be completely dropped...
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* [[Corporal Punishment]]: The teachers beat Ryan senselessly when she didn't do a "B Down" move, which she is incapable of doing as she isn't a video game character.
* [[Corrupt Cop]]: All of the R.O.B robots.
* [[Crossover]]: With [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (Animation)|My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]]... or at least assumed so with "Dashin Rainbow" (Rainbow Dash) making an appearance.
* [[Dark Fic]]: Assumed. Woe, after all, lost his parents and he's constantly moping about it. Of course, due to the way the [[Fanfic]] has been written, it doesn't ''read'' like a [[Dark Fic]]. Diabolical Pie does a better job at this.
* [[Decoy Protagonist]]: Woe is apparently this. Yes, the same Woe that was the main character up until Chapter 11 is now revealed to be this, or at least forced into this due to real life circumstances (Read below).
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* [[Department of Redundancy Department]]: This constantly happens. Many times, sonicluvr spells the same word ''differently'' with each extra time the word is used.
* [[Did Not Do the Research]]: It'd be easier to list the things that ''are'' accurate about the game in this story.
** sonicluvr calls [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (Animation)|Rainbow Dash]] "Dashin Rainbow", who is then called "Rainbow Dasher", which is... a little more accurate.
* [[Disproportionate Retribution]]: Even though beating the resident [[Jerk Sue]] to death is oddly satisfying, this trope is still in effect considering that Anna hasn't really done much to Ryan herself. Not that we're complaining...
* [[Doppelganger Replacement Love Interest]]: Sonic seemed to be becoming this to Anna, replacing Woe who got "bussed". Now that Woe's back, it's likely that [[Left Hanging|this plot point will be dropped]].
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* [[Dysfunctional Family]]: Ryan's family in spades.
* [[Everyone Hates Mathematics|Everyone Hates Language Arts]]: sonicluvr ''really'' doesn't like Language Arts...
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* [[Extranormal Institute]]: It's a school for [[Smash Bros]] characters after all.
* [[Evil Laugh]]: Robot Zombie Collins "cakled" when Woe and Anna's Smash Ball Attacks fail to harm him.
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* [[High School AU]]: Of the [[Smash Bros]] universe.
* [[Holding Out for A Hero]]: Anna puts up no fight whatsoever, thinking that Woe will save her. Her mistake...
* [[Incest Is Relative]]: ''Highly'' implied with the way Ryan was [[Brother
* [[Informed Flaw]]: Woe was apparently being a [[Jerkass]], which [[Disproportionate Retribution|apparently justified him getting ran over by a bus]], despite nothing in the story previously suggesting it (at least [[Designated Hero|to Anna herself, anyways]]). Of course, he is revived soon after.
* [[Made of Explodium]]: Master Hand explodes when hit by Woe.
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* [[Police Brutality]]: The robots routinely beat up and abuse various students who try to run away.
* [[Power of Love]]: Which led to a secret stone, no less!
* [[Rant
* [[Real Life Writes the Plot]]: Apparently, the motivation for the death of Woe in Chapter 11 was due to Anna breaking up with her boyfriend Mark.
** [[Revenge Fic]]: Now has shades of this, although this is directed at a real life person.
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