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The story follows two points of view. Ana/Anna and Woe's (sonicluvr) and Ryan's (Pie)
sonicluvr's story starts with Woe, who is assumed to be an orphaned hedgehog because the story constantly mention his parents dying (or dyeing their hair?) in front of his very eyes. He's basically a [[Palette Swap]] of Sonic. Woe catches the bus and meets a girl named Ana (or Anna or Annna), who is a beautiful girl who has been revealed using a couple slips to be sonicluvr's [[Self Insert]]. Suddenly, Master Hand attacks the bus ([[Department of Redundancy Department|with his hand]]), but is killed by Woe, who expresses his love for Anna. Then they go through school, learning their attacks. Over time, the two are subject to [[Crossover|crossovers]], [[Everything's Deader
Pie's story is a lot less cryptic than sonicluvr's work. It follows a girl named Ryan who is unemployed and has to support her [[Dysfunctional Family|lazy father and the rest of her family]]. After catching her brother Shirley [[A Date
The difference in writing ability could not last forever, though. By Chapter 12, Diabolical Pie couldn't take the lackluster writing ability of her friend, and the [[Fanfic]] exploded into full Civil War between the writers. Now we'll see whether this [[Fanfic]] can be salvaged into something semi-decent, or be condemned into the pit of terrible writing (though it could be [[So Bad It's Good]] [[Bile Fascination|if you're into that kind of stuff]]).
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* [[Absurdly Powerful Student Council|Absurdly Powerful School Security]]: The abusive R.O.B robots wouldn't survive in any real school.
* [[Abusive Parents]]: Ryan has them.
* [[A Date
* [[Alcoholic Parent]]: Ryan's dad is like this.
* [[All Just a Dream]]: sonicluvr [[Retcon|retcons]] Anna's death by saying Ryan dreamed Chapter 12. Apparently, ''Woe's death'' was also in Ryan's dream, despite that plot point being written by sonicluvr. Still, it's still some type of genius to hijack someone else's writing to [[Hand Wave]] your [[Plot Hole]].
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* [[Corporal Punishment]]: The teachers beat Ryan senselessly when she didn't do a "B Down" move, which she is incapable of doing as she isn't a video game character.
* [[Corrupt Cop]]: All of the R.O.B robots.
* [[Crossover]]: With [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic
* [[Dark Fic]]: Assumed. Woe, after all, lost his parents and he's constantly moping about it. Of course, due to the way the [[Fanfic]] has been written, it doesn't ''read'' like a [[Dark Fic]]. Diabolical Pie does a better job at this.
* [[Decoy Protagonist]]: Woe is apparently this. Yes, the same Woe that was the main character up until Chapter 11 is now revealed to be this, or at least forced into this due to real life circumstances (Read below).
** [[Subverted Trope]]: Now that it was revealed that Anna and Mark are back together, Woe is apparently still alive, and will presumably resume as the "protagonist".
* [[Depending
** Case in point: Anna is killed in Diabolical Pie's Chapter 12, and then in Chapter 14, sonicluvr reveals that it was [[All Just a Dream]] and then kills of Ryan.
* [[Deus Ex Machina]]: "Dashin Rainbow" comes out of nowhere to assist the "heroes" in finding Big ROB.
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* [[Department of Redundancy Department]]: This constantly happens. Many times, sonicluvr spells the same word ''differently'' with each extra time the word is used.
* [[Did Not Do the Research]]: It'd be easier to list the things that ''are'' accurate about the game in this story.
** sonicluvr calls [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic
* [[Disproportionate Retribution]]: Even though beating the resident [[Jerk Sue]] to death is oddly satisfying, this trope is still in effect considering that Anna hasn't really done much to Ryan herself. Not that we're complaining...
* [[Doppelganger Replacement Love Interest]]: Sonic seemed to be becoming this to Anna, replacing Woe who got "bussed". Now that Woe's back, it's likely that [[Left Hanging|this plot point will be dropped]].
* [[Dropped a Bridge
** In Chapter 14, in response to Pie declaring war, Ryan dies after waking up from a dream. There's no cause of death either. Ryan just wakes up and dies.
* [[Dysfunctional Family]]: Ryan's family in spades.
* [[Everyone Hates Mathematics|Everyone Hates Language Arts]]: sonicluvr ''really'' doesn't like Language Arts...
* [[Everything's Deader
* [[Extranormal Institute]]: It's a school for [[Smash Bros]] characters after all.
* [[Evil Laugh]]: Robot Zombie Collins "cakled" when Woe and Anna's Smash Ball Attacks fail to harm him.
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* [[He Knows About Timed Hits]]: Characters learning about their moves are shown to "Press B" for their attacks.
* [[High School AU]]: Of the [[Smash Bros]] universe.
* [[Holding Out for
* [[Incest Is Relative]]: ''Highly'' implied with the way Ryan was [[Brother-Sister Incest|talking to her brother]]...
* [[Informed Flaw]]: Woe was apparently being a [[Jerkass]], which [[Disproportionate Retribution|apparently justified him getting ran over by a bus]], despite nothing in the story previously suggesting it (at least [[Designated Hero|to Anna herself, anyways]]). Of course, he is revived soon after.
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* [[Ungrateful Bastard|Ungrateful Bitch]]: sonicluvr views Pie as this, claiming that sonicluvr is the only reason for Pie's "clime to fame". Most people disagree...
* [[Variable Terminal Velocity]]: Ryan falls from two stories up without any sort of injury whatsoever. This is, however, a rare case of this trope following previously established conventions.
* [[Wanton Cruelty to
* [[You're Just Jealous]]: Apparently, everyone's just jealous because of how beautiful Anna is ([[Self Insert|who is briefly referred to in first person]]).
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