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** Comments: The fandom for ''[[The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen]]'' is simply brimming with Mary Sues and badfic galore, but these tales are among the worst. Plotless, incomprehensible, no proofreading, [[Wanton Cruelty to the Common Comma]], etc.
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[http://www.tuxedojack.com/godawful/nauseating/miscellaneous/kanashiinoimi.txt here]
** Fandom: [[Tenchi Muyo!]]
** Pairing: Yes, unfortunately
** Synopsis: Fat and hopeless "[[Otaku]]" [[Original Character]] Jeff is accidentally teleported to the Masaki household by Washu in the middle of masturbating to anime characters. After failing to convince Washu that they only exist to entertain those on the other side of the [[Fourth Wall]], she decides to keep him for experiments. SOMEHOW she feels generous enough to let him meet the rest of the girls. In the process, he meets Sasami. What happens that night... [[Rape as Drama|well]]...
** Comments: This was one fanfic that has been proven to be [[The Man They Couldn't Hang|unMSTable.]] Every attempt to mock the fanfic has led to moments of [[Angrish]] in even the best people and [[MST|MSTies]]. The story's [[Audience-Alienating Premise|premise was so bad]] that an attempt to MST it led two authors to write a [[Revenge Fic]] out of it!
*** This is a [[Most Triumphant Example]] of [[Audience-Alienating Premise]]. Leaf-Chan [[Complete Monster|demonizes]] [[Otaku]] with typecasting that makes ''Lester the Unlikely'' seem accurate, or at least sincere. It's possible this is a scathing [[Author Tract]] aimed directly at the people who will never agree with it.
*** [[Fridge Brilliance|It is.]] Most people don't bother to look beyond the premise. but this is, in fact, a brutal deconstruction (and thinly veiled stealth [[Take That]]) of [[Lolicon|Sasami]] lemons and their fans. It [[Epic Fail|still fails]] though: Leaf-Chan's bias against Otaku is greater than Blender Magazine's against [[Progressive Rock|prog rock.]]
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4550611/1/King_of_The_Hill_Episode_1_Peggys_Revenge King of The Hill Episode 1:Peggy's Revenge]''' You can read the [[MST]] [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EOcEnROBSU here]. (rape, genital mutilation, scat)
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** Comments: [[Character Derailment|Link and Talim are not themselves.]] There are typos, [[Gratuitous Japanese]], and Surpise Sex. [[Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking|And]] [[Cluster F-Bomb|Talim curses more than she does in canon]].
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5805861/1/kronicals_of_rebecca_swansin
** Fandom: [[Twilight]]
** Pairing: OC x "Edoweird"
** Synopsis: Quoted from description:
{{quote|"rebecca swanesin si a cuzin of bella swan and she has jsut cum to live in Fourks with bella and chadlee. watch as rebecca chanjes da flowe of tyme and she hepls dose in fourks."}}
** Comments: There's absolutely no limit to bad grammar in this story. The storyline doesn't make sense, and the Cullens are all taken out of character. The author plans to continue for around 8 more story arcs.
*** It is an obvious [[Troll Fic]], but an unfunny cookie-cutter one. It does such a horrible job at being a [[Troll Fic]] that it deserves to be in this section.
*** ''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6022380/1/Chronicals_of_Rebecca_Swansin_Book_2
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** Pairings: Sakura/'a strange creature'. Possibly.
** Synopsis: Link gets [[Killed Off for Real]] by a horrifying man. Sakura grows up and gets lost in a forest.
** Comments: Confusing. It's like a minefield of bad English. And Sakura is... not a masculine (nor a Hylian) name.
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908090/1/Lucky_Star_Sadness_and_Sorrow Lucky Star Sadness and Sorrow]''' ([[Dark Fic]], Character Death, [[No Punctuation Period]])
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** Comments: Sheesh. The [[Sliding Scale of Idealism Versus Cynicism]] dictated that ''Lucky Star'' [[Dark Fic|dark fics]] were inevitable, but dark fics only work if they have plot and intrigue and provoke some thought other than "BAAAAWWWW Konatas ded!1!!1!118675309". This guy could've done something with Yutaka suddenly mature and strengthened, but nope. In other words, [[They Plotted a Perfectly Good Waste]] ''and'' [[They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot|Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot]] at the same time. At least this author knows how to [[Beyond the Impossible|break the laws of physics]]. And the [[No Punctuation Period|utter lack of punctuation]] adds insult to injury.
*** Even though this fic has the "Complete" tag on Fanfiction.net, the summary space contains the warning not to read it because it's under construction. The "first chapter" of this "two-chapter" fic says the same in bold allcaps. Exactly what the author intends to add is anyone's guess, but you have been warned.
*** Since it's been
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