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* [[Never Mess with Granny]]: Augusta Dorsett Longbottom (Neville's ill-tempered grandmother) and Minerva McGonagall....
* [[Never Mess with Granny]]: Augusta Dorsett Longbottom (Neville's ill-tempered grandmother) and Minerva McGonagall....
* [[Oireland]]: This fic's version of Seamus Finnegan reeks of this trope. JK Rowling has said that naming the character "Seamus Finnegan" was pushing it a bit, but Thanfiction takes the Irish stereotype [[Up to Eleven]]:
* [[Oireland]]: This fic's version of Seamus Finnegan reeks of this trope. JK Rowling has said that naming the character "Seamus Finnegan" was pushing it a bit, but Thanfiction takes the Irish stereotype [[Up to Eleven]]:
{{quote| "Tell you what. You say one word, and I'll make it worth your while. I've smuggled in a bit of the real good stuff – Muggle-made Irish pure – and I'll slip you a tot. Or if you'd rather, I'll work my charms and score you a kiss from that lovely Miss MacDonald you've been castin' eyes at all year. What say you?" (''DAYD'', Chapter 11)}}
{{quote|"Tell you what. You say one word, and I'll make it worth your while. I've smuggled in a bit of the real good stuff – Muggle-made Irish pure – and I'll slip you a tot. Or if you'd rather, I'll work my charms and score you a kiss from that lovely Miss MacDonald you've been castin' eyes at all year. What say you?" (''DAYD'', Chapter 11)}}
* [[POV Sequel|POV Sequels]]: To ''Deathly Hallows''.
* [[POV Sequel|POV Sequels]]: To ''Deathly Hallows''.
* [[Self Fanservice]]: In the books, both Neville and Hannah are a bit pudgy. In DAYD, Hannah's hotness was concealed by the school robes, which made her - but none of the other girls - look fat, and Neville replaces all of his fat with muscle, helped by him being [[Torture Porn|starved for weeks as part of a punishment]].
* [[Self Fanservice]]: In the books, both Neville and Hannah are a bit pudgy. In DAYD, Hannah's hotness was concealed by the school robes, which made her - but none of the other girls - look fat, and Neville replaces all of his fat with muscle, helped by him being [[Torture Porn|starved for weeks as part of a punishment]].
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** It's strongly implied that Neville's summoning of the entire D.A. and allies from the wizarding world for the final battle is less a function of his gee-whiz enthusiasm (as presented in the official canon) and more a tactic to keep the D.A. from imploding out of disappointment.
** It's strongly implied that Neville's summoning of the entire D.A. and allies from the wizarding world for the final battle is less a function of his gee-whiz enthusiasm (as presented in the official canon) and more a tactic to keep the D.A. from imploding out of disappointment.
** Also, a different pedestal breaks in Seamus and Neville's horrified reactions when they find out that Dumbledore's "plan" was a lot more of [[Gambit Roulette]] than [[Batman Gambit]]:
** Also, a different pedestal breaks in Seamus and Neville's horrified reactions when they find out that Dumbledore's "plan" was a lot more of [[Gambit Roulette]] than [[Batman Gambit]]:
{{quote| "Din't you know ol' Dumbledore din't tell them anythin'? They were out there, tryin' not ta get killed, wanderin' around for better part o' a year on a little breadcrumb scavenger hunt, no bleedin' idea o' what they were doin', or what they'd do when they were done."<br />
{{quote|"Din't you know ol' Dumbledore din't tell them anythin'? They were out there, tryin' not ta get killed, wanderin' around for better part o' a year on a little breadcrumb scavenger hunt, no bleedin' idea o' what they were doin', or what they'd do when they were done."
'There has to be a reason, Seamus.' He fought to keep his voice calm, reasonable, but he could hear the tremble of fury and newly-awakened pain at the edges. 'I'm sure he had a reason.' }}
'There has to be a reason, Seamus.' He fought to keep his voice calm, reasonable, but he could hear the tremble of fury and newly-awakened pain at the edges. 'I'm sure he had a reason.' }}
* [[The Casanova]]: Jack Sloper.
* [[The Casanova]]: Jack Sloper.
** And apparently, [[Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass|Colin Creevey]] of all people.
** And apparently, [[Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass|Colin Creevey]] of all people.
{{quote| ''"I did just fine with the Muggle girls on holidays, thank you very much, because they think I'm cute and mysterious and know I go to some kind of exclusive and super-secret private boarding school.”''}}
{{quote|''"I did just fine with the Muggle girls on holidays, thank you very much, because they think I'm cute and mysterious and know I go to some kind of exclusive and super-secret private boarding school.”''}}
* [[Child Soldiers]]: Used in a realistic and very depressing way. Many underaged Hogwarts students fight in the final battle and are killed in gory ways.
* [[Child Soldiers]]: Used in a realistic and very depressing way. Many underaged Hogwarts students fight in the final battle and are killed in gory ways.
* [[Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The Cruciatus Curse is used as routine punishment, {{spoiler|to the point where the students get ''used to it''}} and that doesn't even begin to compare with what {{spoiler|Doctor Belsen does to Mike Corner (his best friend tries to euthanize him half-way through the torture session)}}.
* [[Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The Cruciatus Curse is used as routine punishment, {{spoiler|to the point where the students get ''used to it''}} and that doesn't even begin to compare with what {{spoiler|Doctor Belsen does to Mike Corner (his best friend tries to euthanize him half-way through the torture session)}}.
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* [[La Résistance]]: Dumbledore's Army.
* [[La Résistance]]: Dumbledore's Army.
* [[The Ladette]]: It was hinted at in HP canon, and this fic makes it explicit -- Ginny Weasley:
* [[The Ladette]]: It was hinted at in HP canon, and this fic makes it explicit -- Ginny Weasley:
{{quote| ”I’m the only girl in a family of seven! I could belch the entire Chudley Cannons fight song by the time I was four, but Katie Bell had to tell me when I needed a bra and show me how to put the effing thing on, so don’t act like I’m supposed to be some sheltered little flower about how boys are put together.”}}
{{quote|”I’m the only girl in a family of seven! I could belch the entire Chudley Cannons fight song by the time I was four, but Katie Bell had to tell me when I needed a bra and show me how to put the effing thing on, so don’t act like I’m supposed to be some sheltered little flower about how boys are put together.”}}
* [[Les Collaborateurs]]: Sometimes, but not always, Slytherin House. Most of them hate the Carrows.
* [[Les Collaborateurs]]: Sometimes, but not always, Slytherin House. Most of them hate the Carrows.
* [[Loves the Sound of Screaming]]: The Carrows.
* [[Loves the Sound of Screaming]]: The Carrows.
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* [[Reading Your Rights]]: Aurors are saddled with a wonderfully [[Wall of Text|verbose]] version of the [[You Do Not Have to Say Anything|British police caution]] in order to plug in the extra legal loopholes that being magical might present. Legal buffs might care to notice that in the Wizarding version, the right to remain silent (which is front and center in the Caution and Miranda) is the ''second-to-last'' thing mentioned. Also please note that unlike the caution, this one is to be recited upon arrest (or when the suspect wakes up from all the stunning spells), not interrogation.
* [[Reading Your Rights]]: Aurors are saddled with a wonderfully [[Wall of Text|verbose]] version of the [[You Do Not Have to Say Anything|British police caution]] in order to plug in the extra legal loopholes that being magical might present. Legal buffs might care to notice that in the Wizarding version, the right to remain silent (which is front and center in the Caution and Miranda) is the ''second-to-last'' thing mentioned. Also please note that unlike the caution, this one is to be recited upon arrest (or when the suspect wakes up from all the stunning spells), not interrogation.
** For those of you who want to see it:
** For those of you who want to see it:
{{quote| It is my duty that you be made aware of your standing under the Provision of Magical Rights and Liberties. You have been apprehended by officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement while engaging in activities reasonably believed to be criminal in nature, and there is intent to hold you in violation of the law. Your wand has been confiscated and may not be returned to you unless you are exonerated of charges by the Wizengamot or equivalent legal due process. Officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement may use physical or magical force against you, including such as may cause permanent harm, injury, illness, incapacitation, or death if and only to the degree as is necessary to retain you in custody and to safeguard their own welfare as well as that of others. Any statement or incantation you may say or perform, including via non-verbal means may be used as evidence in a criminal proceeding. You are considered to be innocent until such time as guilt is reasonably proven, however your apprehension in situ is considered temporary grounds upon which you have waived your right to liberty at this time. You have the right to refuse to answer questions, however any false or misleading answers given will result in additional criminal charges. If you believe yourself to be operating under a curse, hex, jinx, or otherwise engaging in your current activities under magical coercion, you may indicate as such at any time. Additional rights and exclusions under wizarding law will be explained to you fully and completely as relevant. Do you understand these rights and exclusions? }}
{{quote|It is my duty that you be made aware of your standing under the Provision of Magical Rights and Liberties. You have been apprehended by officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement while engaging in activities reasonably believed to be criminal in nature, and there is intent to hold you in violation of the law. Your wand has been confiscated and may not be returned to you unless you are exonerated of charges by the Wizengamot or equivalent legal due process. Officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement may use physical or magical force against you, including such as may cause permanent harm, injury, illness, incapacitation, or death if and only to the degree as is necessary to retain you in custody and to safeguard their own welfare as well as that of others. Any statement or incantation you may say or perform, including via non-verbal means may be used as evidence in a criminal proceeding. You are considered to be innocent until such time as guilt is reasonably proven, however your apprehension in situ is considered temporary grounds upon which you have waived your right to liberty at this time. You have the right to refuse to answer questions, however any false or misleading answers given will result in additional criminal charges. If you believe yourself to be operating under a curse, hex, jinx, or otherwise engaging in your current activities under magical coercion, you may indicate as such at any time. Additional rights and exclusions under wizarding law will be explained to you fully and completely as relevant. Do you understand these rights and exclusions? }}
* [[Secret Diary]]: ''A Peccatis'' starts with Neville and Harry receiving, and having to figure out the meaning of, isolated pages from Dumbledore's diary.
* [[Secret Diary]]: ''A Peccatis'' starts with Neville and Harry receiving, and having to figure out the meaning of, isolated pages from Dumbledore's diary.
* [[Yank the Dog's Chain]]: ''A Peccatis''. {{spoiler|Someone is going [[Ax Crazy]] on the Order of the Phoenix, and Neville, Harry AND Ron all lose people who are extremely important to them.}} It's especially blatant when {{spoiler|Neville's parents are killed off immediately after a breakthrough in communicating with his mother.}} And {{spoiler|Hermione is accused of being the serial killer.}}
* [[Yank the Dog's Chain]]: ''A Peccatis''. {{spoiler|Someone is going [[Ax Crazy]] on the Order of the Phoenix, and Neville, Harry AND Ron all lose people who are extremely important to them.}} It's especially blatant when {{spoiler|Neville's parents are killed off immediately after a breakthrough in communicating with his mother.}} And {{spoiler|Hermione is accused of being the serial killer.}}