Partially Kissed Hero/YMMV: Difference between revisions

m
fix typo
(Wrong trope. A Designated Villain is a character who the plot says is a villain, but never actually does villainous things. The versions of Dumbledore and Snape in this fic are an endless dog-kicking parade.)
m (fix typo)
 
(One intermediate revision by the same user not shown)
Line 3:
* [[Arc Fatigue]]: The author interrupted his own narrative to dive into a series of side-plots and digressions that had ''absolutely nothing to do with the central story'', including time travel, the space race, and now a fight with vampires. Several of the story's reviewers have used the phrase "gone off the rails", while other reviewers have said things along the lines of "lost sight of the original plot" about the author.
* [[Complete Monster]]: Dumbledore is made into this, but eventually his crimes become so many and so laughable he [[Jumping the Shark|jumps the shark]]. Due to the sheer amount of [[Moral Dissonance]], though, a good number of readers consider ''Harry'' to be this.
* [[Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy]]
* [[Designated Hero]]: Harry. See also: [[Moral Dissonance]].
* [[High Octane Nightmare Fuel]]: Chapter 9. {{spoiler|Snape tries Legilimency on Harry, only for Harry to rebound the effects on him, making him claw out his own eyes, breaking his mind, and finally making Snape's head explode, while he's screaming in complete agony the entire time. This is in front of a class full of third years.}}