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*** "Organization XIII in [[World War Two]]" ''is'' a decent idea for a [[Dark Fic]]; but a combination of [[Beige Prose]], historical inaccuracy, [[Canon Defilement]], and [[WAFF|unsuitable fluffiness]] dooms this fic before it leaves the ground.
 
* '''[https://web.archive.org/web/20141214041742/http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?showtopic=917 Invader MAZ]''' ([[Mary Sue]], horrible grammar, [[Script Fic|script format]], character death) (thankfully) Safe for work
** Fandom: [[Invader Zim]] with a cameo from [[Johnny the Homicidal Maniac|Johnny]]
** Pairings: [[Mary Sue]]/Zim, Tallest Sues/Tallest, and a lot of [[Starboarding]]
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** Synopsis: They're all one-chapter stories that should be separate chapters of a single story, and they're about the seven peculiar offspring fathered by Henry Jekyll and an unidentified woman. At least, one hopes there was a woman involved. Four of the children are werewolves, two can walk through walls, and one is a vampire.
** Comments: The fandom for ''[[The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen]]'' is simply brimming with Mary Sues and badfic galore, but these tales are among the worst. Plotless, incomprehensible, no proofreading, [[Wanton Cruelty to the Common Comma]], etc.
 
* '''Kammie's World''', by "RedeKamafa"/"Attackofthecatpeople" (a retrospective, by [[Old Shame|the creator themselves]], is available [https://kmfstudiosarchives.neocities.org/kammie here])
** Fandom: Countryballs, Greeny Phatom, Lolcats, YTMND, SCP, and half-a-dozen other things, mostly [[Web Original]]s.
** Pairing: Several OC pairings, all of which seem forced.
** Synopsis: For quite a while, this was one of the shining examples of all that is wrong with DeviantArt OC culture. It was so bad, that the creator of the series considers it an [[Old Shame]]. It's mainly a [[Wake Up, Go to School, Save the World]] scenario about a young girl named Kammie fighting evil while dealing with her social life, but the worldbuilding (advertised as the main draw) is piss-poor, not to mention [[Squick|the shoehorned-in menstrual and urolagnic fetishes]].
** Comments: This was added to the list by '''''the creator themselves''''', who regrets wasting over 5 years of their life on this utter disaster, and it's not hard to see why.
 
* '''[[Kanashii no Imi]]''', by Leaf-chan (rape, character death, explicit sex), available in al its horrid "glory" [https://web.archive.org/web/20120419035330/http://www.tuxedojack.com/godawful/nauseating/miscellaneous/kanashiinoimi.txt here]
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** Fandom: ''[[Lucky Star]]''
** Synopsis: This story is a [[Flash Back]] framed by Konata and Minami's funeral. What happened: some nutjob goes on a shooting rampage. He almost kills Yutaka before Konata dives in front of his bullet in a [[Heroic Sacrifice]]. Then Yutaka [[Took a Level in Badass|takes a level in badass]] and starts whaling on the killer. Minami tries to pull him away but gets shot herself. Yutaka's sudden courage doesn't resurface. The story ends just after the flashback with the cast crying over Konata and Minami's graves.
** Comments: Sheesh. The [[Sliding Scale of Idealism Versus Cynicism]] dictated that ''Lucky Star'' [[Dark Fic|dark fics]]s were inevitable, but dark fics only work if they have plot and intrigue and provoke some thought other than "BAAAAWWWW Konatas ded!1!!1!118675309". This guy could've done something with Yutaka suddenly mature and strengthened, but nope. In other words, [[They Plotted a Perfectly Good Waste]] ''and'' [[They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot|Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot]] at the same time. At least this author knows how to [[Beyond the Impossible|break the laws of physics]]. And the [[No Punctuation Period|utter lack of punctuation]] adds insult to injury.
*** Even though this fic has the "Complete" tag on Fanfiction.net, the summary space contains the warning not to read it because it's under construction. The "first chapter" of this "two-chapter" fic says the same in bold allcaps. Exactly what the author intends to add is anyone's guess, but you have been warned.
*** Since it's been years since he posted the fanfic (on March 2009), it's safe to say that he posted it when it was still "under construction", and didn't bother to edit the description when the fic was complete.
 
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