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'''''Important Note''''': Merely being offensive in its subject matter is not enough to justify a work as [[So Bad
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** Fandom: [[Kingdom Hearts]]
** Pairings: Yes
** Synopsis: Organization XIII are (human?) Nazis, some more willingly than others. They do things that, in [[Real Life]], would have put them in a concentration camp. Instead, they're running concentration camps between classes...
** Comments: This review says it best:
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*** [[Crowning Moment of Awesome|Indeed it does.]]
*** "Organization XIII in [[World War Two]]" ''is'' a decent idea for a [[Dark Fic]]; but a combination of [[Beige Prose]], historical inaccuracy, [[Canon Defilement]], and [[WAFF|unsuitable fluffiness]] dooms this fic before it leaves the ground.
* '''[https://web.archive.org/web/20141214041742/http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?showtopic=917 Invader MAZ]''' ([[Mary Sue]], horrible grammar, [[Script Fic|script format]], character death) (thankfully) Safe for work
** Fandom: [[Invader Zim]] with a cameo from [[Johnny the Homicidal Maniac|Johnny]]
** Pairings: [[Mary Sue]]/Zim, Tallest Sues/Tallest, and a lot of [[
** Synopsis: Enter Maz, who is "exceedingly tall and very beautiful for a a girl [[Did Not Do Research|Irken invader girl]]". The Tallest both adore her, but the thought of being in a threesome [[Squick|squicks]] her out, and so she goes after ZIM -- um, she leaves for Earth to be with her [[Relationship Sue|one true love]]. She infiltrates skool. All the boys fall in love with her, including Dib, whom she uses to get to ZIM. She confesses to ZIM and then uses a magical device to turn them both older -- never mind that ZIM is canonically already an adult. Out of nowhere, ZIM lets it slip that [[Character Derailment|he's in love with Tak]]. Maz is unimpressed and sends Nny to [[Die for Our Ship|take care of her]]. With that out of the way, ZIM and MAZ proceed to kiss 56,935,748,302 times and then are married. The fic ends with Dib's death and ZIM and Maz's sending their [[Babies Ever After|annoying offspring]] to the Tallest. The end.
** Comments: Oh dear God, the script format! The [[Beige Prose|lack of description]] and the general strangeness are too much for anyone with brain cells. And it looks sincere...
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** Fandom: [[The Beatles]] [[Real Person Fic]]
** Pairings: Paul/Jennifer (an [[Author Avatar]]), implied past Ringo/Jennifer
** Synopsis: After a wild bout of sex that somehow feels unusual to our narrator Jennifer (with Paul pulling out just before climax as an attempt at birth control), Paul becomes seriously ill. A week later (with few details, but we know Paul has not been improving), the doctor determines, hardly believing it himself, that Paul is pregnant because [[You Fail Biology Forever|Jennifer's egg somehow got into him]] -- and no, we do not know how this was determined; what is more, it will be a life-endangering pregnancy because the doctor does ''not'' know where the egg implanted, just that it's in the stomach cavity, likely on a vital organ. Paul is pro-life enough that [[Good Girls Avoid Abortion|he decides to go through with it anyway]], to Jennifer's astonishment. Much pain, [[UST]], and [[Poor Communication Kills|poor communication]] ensues.
** Comments: This [[Fanfic]] has been sought out by people who aren't fans of [[The Beatles]] for its depiction of how not to do mpreg; it is known as the infamous Paul McCartney [[Mary Sue]] [[Mister Seahorse|mpreg]] fic. It is also a [[Hurt
* The '''Jekyll's Children''' series: ''"Jekyll's children,"'' ''"Jekyll's children part two,"'' ''"Torien's Goodbye,"'' and ''"Werewolves part two."'' (Capitalization is the author's.) A send-up (read: [[MST]]) by LadyNorbert is [http://community.livejournal.com/marysues/1737042.html here].
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** Pairing: Henry Jekyll/unknown.
** Synopsis: They're all one-chapter stories that should be separate chapters of a single story, and they're about the seven peculiar offspring fathered by Henry Jekyll and an unidentified woman. At least, one hopes there was a woman involved. Four of the children are werewolves, two can walk through walls, and one is a vampire.
** Comments: The fandom for ''[[The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen]]'' is simply brimming with Mary Sues and badfic galore, but these tales are among the worst. Plotless, incomprehensible, no proofreading, [[Wanton Cruelty to
* '''Kammie's World''', by "RedeKamafa"/"Attackofthecatpeople" (a retrospective, by [[Old Shame|the creator themselves]], is available [https://kmfstudiosarchives.neocities.org/kammie here])
** Fandom: Countryballs, Greeny Phatom, Lolcats, YTMND, SCP, and half-a-dozen other things, mostly [[Web Original]]s.
** Fandom: [[Tenchi Muyo]]▼
** Pairing: Several OC pairings, all of which seem forced.
** Synopsis: For quite a while, this was one of the shining examples of all that is wrong with DeviantArt OC culture. It was so bad, that the creator of the series considers it an [[Old Shame]]. It's mainly a [[Wake Up, Go to School, Save the World]] scenario about a young girl named Kammie fighting evil while dealing with her social life, but the worldbuilding (advertised as the main draw) is piss-poor, not to mention [[Squick|the shoehorned-in menstrual and urolagnic fetishes]].
** Comments: This was added to the list by '''''the creator themselves''''', who regrets wasting over 5 years of their life on this utter disaster, and it's not hard to see why.
* '''[[Kanashii no Imi]]''', by Leaf-chan (rape, character death, explicit sex), available in al its horrid "glory" [https://web.archive.org/web/20120419035330/http://www.tuxedojack.com/godawful/nauseating/miscellaneous/kanashiinoimi.txt here]
▲** Fandom: [[Tenchi Muyo!]]
** Pairing: Yes, unfortunately
** Synopsis: Fat and hopeless "[[Otaku]]" [[Original Character]] Jeff is accidentally teleported to the Masaki household by Washu in the middle of masturbating to anime characters. After failing to convince Washu that they only exist to entertain those on the other side of the [[Fourth Wall]], she decides to keep him for experiments. SOMEHOW she feels generous enough to let him meet the rest of the girls. In the process, he meets Sasami. What happens that night... [[Rape as Drama|well]]...
** Comments: This was one fanfic that has been proven to be [[The Man They Couldn't Hang|unMSTable.]] Every attempt to mock the fanfic has led to moments of [[Angrish]] in even the best people and [[MST|MSTies]]. The story's [[Audience-Alienating Premise|premise was so bad]] that an attempt to MST it led two authors to write a [[Revenge Fic]] out of it!
*** This is a [[Most Triumphant Example]] of [[Audience-Alienating Premise]]. Leaf-Chan [[Complete Monster|demonizes]] [[Otaku]] with typecasting that makes ''Lester the Unlikely'' seem accurate, or at least sincere. It's possible this is a scathing [[Author Tract]] aimed directly at the people who will never agree with it.
*** [[Fridge Brilliance|It is.]] Most people don't bother to look beyond the premise. but this is, in fact, a brutal deconstruction (and thinly veiled stealth [[Take That]]) of [[Lolicon|Sasami]] lemons and their fans. It [[Epic Fail|still fails]] though: Leaf-Chan's bias against Otaku is greater than Blender Magazine's against [[Progressive Rock|prog rock.]]
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4550611/1/King_of_The_Hill_Episode_1_Peggys_Revenge King of The Hill Episode 1:Peggy's Revenge]''' You can read the [[MST]] [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EOcEnROBSU here]. (rape, genital mutilation, scat)
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** Synopsis: Peggy, frustrated with her husband's performance in bed because of his narrow urethra, decides to get some of her friends together and get a little revenge. This revenge involves dick torture and scat. Lots and lots of scat.
** Comments: Horrifically bad. It would normally be funny, but the scene where Lucky tries to widen Hank's urethra is cringe-worthy. Then comes the pooping... This may be the worst ''[[King of the Hill]]'' fanfic imaginable, complete with [[Rouge Angles of Satin|miserable spelling and grammar.]]
*** The sad thing is, if this had been done just a little more competently, then it might have been funny.
*** Anyone else notice that Lucky is referred to as "Mike" in one sentence, and Peggy is called "Jenny" once? Also, the fic switches to a first person POV at odd points near the end; perhaps Bill was invited to watch but, as usual, people ignored him :P. Or perhaps the whole fic is copy-pasted from something else.
*** Also, note the singular review:
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**** Seriously?
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** Comments: [[Character Derailment|Link and Talim are not themselves.]] There are typos, [[Gratuitous Japanese]], and Surpise Sex. [[Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking|And]] [[Cluster F-Bomb|Talim curses more than she does in canon]].
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5805861/1/kronicals_of_rebecca_swansin
** Fandom: [[Twilight]]
** Pairing: OC x "Edoweird"
** Synopsis: Quoted from description:
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** Comments: There's absolutely no limit to bad grammar in this story. The storyline doesn't make sense, and the Cullens are all taken out of character. The author plans to continue for around 8 more story arcs.
*** It is an obvious [[Troll Fic]], but an unfunny cookie-cutter one. It does such a horrible job at being a [[Troll Fic]] that it deserves to be in this section.
▲** Comments: There's absolutely no limit to bad grammar in this story. The storyline doesn't make sense, and the Cullens are all taken out of character. The author plans to continue for around 8 more story arcs.
*** ''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6022380/1/Chronicals_of_Rebecca_Swansin_Book_2
▲*** It is an obvious [[Troll Fic]], but an unfunny cookie-cutter one. It does such a horrible job at being a [[Troll Fic]] that it deserves to be in this section.
▲*** [http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6022380/1/Chronicals_of_Rebecca_Swansin_Book_2 ''Crap, There's a sequel.'']
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** Pairings: Sakura/'a strange creature'. Possibly.
** Synopsis: Link gets [[Killed Off for Real]] by a horrifying man. Sakura grows up and gets lost in a forest.
** Comments: Confusing. It's like a minefield of bad English. And Sakura is... not a masculine (nor a Hylian) name.
* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4908090/1/Lucky_Star_Sadness_and_Sorrow Lucky Star Sadness and Sorrow]''' ([[Dark Fic]], Character Death, [[No Punctuation Period]])
** Fandom: ''[[Lucky Star]]''
** Synopsis: This story is a [[Flash Back]] framed by Konata and Minami's funeral. What happened: some nutjob goes on a shooting rampage. He almost kills Yutaka before Konata dives in front of his bullet in a [[Heroic Sacrifice]]. Then Yutaka [[Took a Level
** Comments: Sheesh. The [[Sliding Scale of Idealism Versus Cynicism]] dictated that ''Lucky Star'' [[Dark Fic
*** Even though this fic has the "Complete" tag on Fanfiction.net, the summary space contains the warning not to read it because it's under construction. The "first chapter" of this "two-chapter" fic says the same in bold allcaps. Exactly what the author intends to add is anyone's guess, but you have been warned.
*** Since it's been
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