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Angst Dissonance: So very much.
Ass Pull: Hermione's feelings for Ron in the sequel are canonical, but we saw no sign of them in the original when Hermione had no complaints at all about Ron getting his wand serviced by Jaiden.
Big Lipped Alligator Moment: The sex scene in Chapter 10, which appears out of nowhere, in a completely different narrative style from the rest of the fic, straight after Jaiden attempts suicide. It's removed in some versions of the fic, which might actually be for the better.
Canon Defilement
Complete Monster: Guess who.
Critical Research Failure: "And what was worse was Ron had stolen her virginity, which she was saving for someone special, and he torn it from her so forcefully. What if he done it again?"
Crowning Moment of Funny: "My preciousss," unintentionally so.
Damsel Scrappy: Jaiden.
Die for Our Ship
Draco in Leather Pants: Draco himself.
Idiot Plot: See Too Dumb to Live.
Mary Sue: Jaiden, of course.
- Sympathetic Sue: It's a Hurt Comfort Fic fuelled by Deus Angst Machina. What do you expect?
- Relationship Sue: For Draco.
- Purity Sue
- Anti-Sue: Unintentionally.
Nightmare Retardant
Ron the Death Eater: Literally.