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Line 3: {{quote\|''"It was a really hot guy with big ears and green pigtails."''\|A quote from chapter six. [[It Makes Sense in Context\|It's not that weird if you've watched the show...]] Sort of.}} {{quote\|''"Hello. My name is Aizawa Sakura. I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto. This is my story."''\|The fact that she describes herself based on her pantyhose should say a lot about what you're getting yourself into by reading this.}} ~~[[Non-Indicative Name\|~~'''''Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope]]''''' is a fanfiction set in the Universe of [[Tokyo Mew Mew]]. It's told from the perspective of the [[The Ojou]] Minto's twin sister, a blatant [[Mary Sue]], who wears a variety of [[Stripperific]] “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, which shouldn't have been visible in the first place considering she's in school, she spends her time crying her eyes out for reasons that are supposed to be Tearjerkers.(They're not) Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under [[Did Not Do the Research]]. Line 14 ⟶ 12: {{quote\|I couldn't really get down right now, could I? I fidgeted with lace on the edge of my sleeve. Cluny, contrasting rather nicely with the thick cotton. Bell sleeves, not exaggerated, or tacky. My pannier was well hidden, and my skirt fell just below the knees. The high neck itched slightly. I straightened my bow. It was odd. I'd wondered if, upon seeing something like this, silly and superficial things wouldn't matter anymore. I sighed. "I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss." }} If this had kept up, "No Hope Left" may have been rescued from the badfic pile. But the very next chapter opens with "(Lol srry about the suckish writing an spelling on the last chaptr XD I was tired.)", and immediately launches back into the author's usual pre-chapter-16 writing style. Line 20 ⟶ 17: The First Chapter can be found here: http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i ~~===~~ {{tropelist\|Tropes Applying to This Totally Not a [[Troll Fic]] work: ~~===~~}}▼ ~~----~~ ▲=== Tropes Applying to This Totally Not a [[Troll Fic]] work: === * [[Accidental Innuendo]]: "And then, KISSHU CAME!" * [[Acceptable Targets]]: Preps and hackers. Line 80 ⟶ 74: [[Category:Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope Left]] [[Category:Fanfic]] [[Category:Tokyo Index]] [[Category:Tokyo Mew Mew/Fan Works]]