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{{quote|''"It was a really hot guy with big ears and green pigtails."''|A quote from chapter six. [[It Makes Sense in Context|It's not that weird if you've watched the show...]] Sort of.}}
{{quote|''"Hello. My name is Aizawa Sakura. I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto. This is my story."''|The fact that she describes herself based on her pantyhose should say a lot about what you're getting yourself into by reading this.}}
Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under [[Did Not Do the Research]].
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"I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss." }}
If this had kept up, "No Hope Left" may have been rescued from the badfic pile. But the very next chapter opens with "(Lol srry about the suckish writing an spelling on the last chaptr XD I was tired.)", and immediately launches back into the author's usual pre-chapter-16 writing style.
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The First Chapter can be found here: http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i
▲=== Tropes Applying to This Totally Not a [[Troll Fic]] work: ===
* [[Accidental Innuendo]]: "And then, KISSHU CAME!"
* [[Acceptable Targets]]: Preps and hackers.
* [[All of the Other Reindeer]]: enforced...
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* [[Alpha Bitch]]: Almost every female character, according to Sakura. Ichigo dumps her friends for no reason, Minto steals boyfriends, Lindsay pulls hair... *etc*
* [[Anti-Hero]]: Sakura Aizawa, who likes to kill hackers and perverts. Only those so far.
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* [[Disproportionate Retribution]]: Violently killing hackers, even if offscreen, people?
** ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage. I wish I was lying.
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** Similarly, in chapter 12:
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* [[Die for Our Ship]]: Every pairing has been changed to Sakura + INSERT NAME HERE.
* [[Fat Bastard]]: Mr. Davidson. He's only mentioned in passing, but, yes.
* [[Elegant Gothic Lolita]]: subverted with a good case of [[Did Not Do the Research]]. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:
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* [[Gratuitous Japanese]]: Gratuitously.
* [[Growing the Beard]]: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops the Wangst about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.
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* [[Maybe Magic, Maybe Mundane]]: Haruko-chan. She has a mysterious past involving demons, she never wears the school uniform (like, EVER. Sakura wore it once.) and she doesn't seem to show much influence on the world around her, but [[Word of God]] said she wasn't just a figment of our heroine's imagination.
* [[Norse Mythology]]: All throughout chapter 21, such as:
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I WILL MAKE A NEW EARTH FROM YOUR FLESH, AND A SKY FROM THE DOME OF YOU DEFEATED SKULL!
Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of DarkalfHeim, ... }}
* [[Panty Shot]]: showing up in the oddest of places
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* [[Parental Favoritism]]: Sakura and Minto's parents seem to prefer the latter, to a comedic extent.
** I think its supposed to be a [[Tear Jerker]]
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* [[Rich Bitch]]: Minto.
* [[Rouge Angles of Satin]]: A reverse case, when describing her dress in chapter 9:
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* [[Sadist Teacher]]: Mr. Davidson. Probably more.
* [[Shout
** In chapter ten, Kisshu screams "[[My Immortal|BECAUSE I LOVE HER]]"
** In chapter 20,
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* [[Tomboy and Girly Girl]]: Sakura and Minto, are described as this in chapter fourteen. However considering the way Sakura, the 'tomboy' of the two, dresses and generally acts, it doesn't really work.
* [[What Do You Mean It Wasn't Made
* [[World of Ham]]
* [[X Meets Y]]: [[Tokyo Mew Mew]] meets [[My Immortal]].
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