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 Triple H (Wrestling) Your edit:
-** Don't hit [[Stephanie McMahon (Wrestling)| his wife]]. It's a sure fire way to get him to beating you down, [[Randy Orton (Wrestling)| even if you was tossed]] to her by [[Bryan Danielson (Wrestling)| another wreslter by chance]].
+** Don't hit [[Stephanie McMahon| his wife]]. It's a sure fire way to get him to beating you down, [[Randy Orton| even if you was tossed]] to her by [[Bryan Danielson| another wreslter by chance]].
-** Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, [[Bryan Danielson (Wrestling)| somebody tried in hopes of having challenge a match with him]]. How did Triple H and Stephanie handed this... get some [[Kane (Wrestling)| get enforcement of course]], though...
+** Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, [[Bryan Danielson| somebody tried in hopes of having challenge a match with him]]. How did Triple H and Stephanie handed this... get some [[Kane (wrestling)| get enforcement of course]], though...
 You use a lot of improper word tenses and malapropisms (improper words) in these sentences, as well as not ending sentence with proper punctuation. Here's how to fix that:
-** Don't hit [[Stephanie McMahon (Wrestling)| his wife]]. It's a sure fire way to get him to beat you down, [[Randy Orton (Wrestling)| even if you were tossed]] to her by [[Bryan Danielson (Wrestling)| another wrestler by chance]].
+** Don't hit [[Stephanie McMahon| his wife]]. It's a sure fire way to get him to beat you down, [[Randy Orton| even if you were tossed]] to her by [[Bryan Danielson| another wrestler by chance]].
-** Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, [[Bryan Danielson (Wrestling)| somebody tried in hopes of having a match with him]]. How did Triple H and Stephanie handle this?  They got some [[Kane (Wrestling)|enforcement of course]].
+** Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, [[Bryan Danielson| somebody tried in hopes of having a match with him]]. How did Triple H and Stephanie handle this?  They got some [[Kane (wrestling)|enforcement of course]].
 My suggestion is to speak what you are about to say in your mind before writing it. If it sounds inappropriate in your head, you need to fix it.