Topic on Talk:Stupid Evil
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My thoughts...
Re-writing examples needs to be done carefully so that we don't give away spoilers - very few reveals count as It Was His Sled. Thus, we need to be careful how much we say about what's in Johnny's head and who it benefits to keep around.
Cutting mid-page chatter and Justifying Edits is a good thing, IMHO. Deleting examples altogether isn't.
And we need to be careful how many bullet-levels deep we go. Two levels usually isn't Natter in the main page, five levels usually is, three levels... can be.
If I had spotted this first, I would have left in the bit about the economic fallacy of everybody being able to afford the palliative care, but otherwise would have gone with a re-write similar to what Umbire the Phantom did write.