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Hi! I spotted two different problems with your phrases.
"A man who has devoted most of his life to strengthening his magic and thus dubbed 'The Sage' by others."
That's a good start for a sentence, but it's only a start - it's a sentence fragment. You've identified who you're talking about but you haven't said what he did.
"Magic Power is something people are born with along with fauna called Magic Beast and Demon Beasts."
That's an ambiguous sentence. You can get away with using it, but somebody might misinterpret it to say that people are born with magic power, magic beasts, and demon beasts.
I hope this helps.