Topic on User talk:Robkelk

This has been difficult for me with all of this grammar being wrong in some way. I have tried my best over and over again to get better. I admit I make mistakes but it getting ridiculous to me. I will come straight that I have a form of ASD and that I beseech your help with grammar. I have tried my best to review how I got something wrong. I even have bought a year of Grammarly and used it multiple times on the site yet that isn't good enough. I don't know if it's me, the site, Grammar, different perspective or a combination of things. I want to get better at this and that I managed to make a summary that lacks grammar problems on Epithet Erased while on Marked for Failure, the summary was completely redone. If I may ask you from three examples that you have edited and said that there is a problem with the grammar. Here are the examples:

A man who has devoted most of his life to strengthening his magic and thus dubbed 'The Sage' by others.

Magic Power is something people are born with along with fauna called Magic Beast and Demon Beasts. ( I also noticed how Magic Beast isn't plural.

Magic Power is something people are born with along with fauna called Magic Beast and Demon Beasts.

Hi! I spotted two different problems with your phrases.

"A man who has devoted most of his life to strengthening his magic and thus dubbed 'The Sage' by others."

That's a good start for a sentence, but it's only a start - it's a sentence fragment. You've identified who you're talking about but you haven't said what he did.

"Magic Power is something people are born with along with fauna called Magic Beast and Demon Beasts."

That's an ambiguous sentence. You can get away with using it, but somebody might misinterpret it to say that people are born with magic power, magic beasts, and demon beasts.

I hope this helps.

Thanks for the help, I really appreciate this and that I can get better with the sight.