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It's lacking some necessary markup, but more importantly, it's a grammatic mess and almost unreadable as written. Please feel free to revise it and resubmit it. I've quoted it below for your convenience, as it has been languishing in the moderation queue over the holiday weekend:
It's lacking some necessary markup, but more importantly, it's a grammatic mess and almost unreadable as written. Please feel free to revise it and resubmit it. I've quoted it below for your convenience, as it has been languishing in the moderation queue over the holiday weekend:


{{quote|<code>[https://fandomania.com/dvd-review-alice-in-wonderland-1966-bbc-television-play/ This article about the 1966 television film] of Alice in Wonderland mistakes it as a television play, The reviewer hasn't even seen the TV movie before, however a television play for Alice in Wonderland was a 1965 episode from the BBC television series ''The Wednesday Play'' that was broadcasted a year before the TV film.</code>}}
{{quote|<code><nowiki>[https://fandomania.com/dvd-review-alice-in-wonderland-1966-bbc-television-play/ This article about the 1966 television film] of Alice in Wonderland mistakes it as a television play, The reviewer hasn't even seen the TV movie before, however a television play for Alice in Wonderland was a 1965 episode from the BBC television series ''The Wednesday Play'' that was broadcasted a year before the TV film.</nowiki></code>}}


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