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 * [[Card-Carrying Villain]]: Ron doesn't seem to have any real motivation for his behaviour in this fic.
-* [[Chickification]]: Hermione manages to be overpowered by "shit wizard" [[Ron the Death Eater|Ron]] ''twice'' for the sake of [[Rape as Backstory]]. That she doesn't otherwise appear to be reduced in power constitutes a major [[Plot Hole]].
+* [[Chickification]]: Hermione manages to be overpowered by "shit wizard" [[Ron the Death Eater|Ron]] ''twice'' for the sake of [[Rape as Backstory]]. The only minor saving grace of the writing is that Ron didn't overpower her magically but physically, which at least makes some kind of sense what with Ron being notably larger and stronger. Still doesn't make Hermione look good when Ron can get the drop on her twice before she can get her wand out, though.
 * [[Crapsack World]]: The original timeline is so bad that letting Voldemort win would probably have improved matters.
 * [[Darker and Edgier]]: Of course.