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** Synopsis: Organization XIII are (human?) Nazis, some more willingly than others. They do things that, in [[Real Life]], would have put them in a concentration camp. Instead, they're running concentration camps between classes...
** Comments: This review says it best:
{{quote| "You know, I don't think there is a word in the english language to convey just how horribly offensive and sickening this writing is. I also don't think there's a word for the kind of person who is stupid enough to think that the genocide of millions is a good background for a glorified highschool romance. Congratulations, you've just pissed on the memory of the millions who died during that horrifying war. This is honestly one of the worst things I've ever read, and that's not even including the sub-par writing, horrible grammar and hideous mischaracterization. This is simply depraved."
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*** [[Crowning Moment of Awesome|Indeed it does.]]
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*** Anyone else notice that Lucky is referred to as "Mike" in one sentence, and Peggy is called "Jenny" once? Also, the fic switches to a first person POV at odd points near the end; perhaps Bill was invited to watch but, as usual, people ignored him :P. Or perhaps the whole fic is copy-pasted from something else.
*** Also, note the singular review:
{{quote| "wow, that was somewhat different but still great."
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**** Seriously?
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** Pairing: OC x "Edoweird"
** Synopsis: Quoted from description:
{{quote| "rebecca swanesin si a cuzin of bella swan and she has jsut cum to live in Fourks with bella and chadlee. watch as rebecca chanjes da flowe of tyme and she hepls dose in fourks."
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** Comments: There's absolutely no limit to bad grammar in this story. The storyline doesn't make sense, and the Cullens are all taken out of character. The author plans to continue for around 8 more story arcs.
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