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** Comments: This [[Fanfic]] has been sought out by people who aren't fans of [[The Beatles]] for its depiction of how not to do mpreg; it is known as the infamous Paul McCartney [[Mary Sue]] [[Mister Seahorse|mpreg]] fic. It is also a [[Hurt Comfort Fic]], only with almost no comfort for Paul, who is the one doing most of the hurting. It's bad enough (nigh-involuntary screams, tears, passing out cold) that he makes one impulsive suicide attempt. (That he forgets that death by sleeping pills would be bad for the baby may or may not be justified.) Jennifer (the character) is at least part [[Tsundere Sue]] and is quite callous about people other than herself and Paul - and she isn't exactly easy on him. (When Ringo finally learns about the pregnancy and asks who's messed up, Jennifer proposes they have sex to find out. Ringo rejects the idea violently - and Jennifer is ''hurt.'') The pregnancy nearly kills Paul several times over, and he is manhandled several times during it even though it's explicitly said it'll make him worse - sometimes by an angry Jennifer, who should know better. Paul and Jennifer still ''try'' to have sex, and the mood killers aren't directly related to Paul's suffering. The pacing is bad: there is little drama in the dramatic events, and the story is only about twenty pages (and the last one is somewhat anticlimactic). If this can be done competently, it needs more space to be done in. The story also [[You Fail Biology Forever|violates the laws of biology]] more than necessary for mpreg. And we get [[Rouge Angles of Satin]] and [[Wanton Cruelty to The Common Comma]]. ''Almost'' [[So Bad ItsIt's Good]], though. An [[Old Shame]] for its author.

** Comments: This was one fanfic that has been proven to be [[The Man They Couldn't Hang|unMSTable.]] Every attempt to mock the fanfic has led to moments of [[Angrish]] in even the best people and [[MST|MSTies]]. The story's [[Audience -Alienating Premise|premise was so bad]] that an attempt to MST it led two authors to write a [[Revenge Fic]] out of it!

*** This is a [[Most Triumphant Example]] of [[Audience -Alienating Premise]]. Leaf-Chan [[Complete Monster|demonizes]] [[Otaku]] with typecasting that makes ''Lester the Unlikely'' seem accurate, or at least sincere. It's possible this is a scathing [[Author Tract]] aimed directly at the people who will never agree with it.

** Comments: [[Character Derailment|Link and Talim are not themselves.]] There are typos, [[Gratuitous Japanese]], and Surpise Sex. [[Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking|And]] [[Cluster F -Bomb|Talim curses more than she does in canon]].

* '''[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5805861/1/kronicals_of_rebecca_swansin ''kronicals of rebecca swansin'']''', by TwirightRova: (Crazy Author who drops [[Cluster F -Bomb|F-bombs every paragraph or so,]] horrible grammar, and incoherent plot)

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