Topic on User talk:Jade Shauni

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Well, it's a good start, but a) it should have been started in the Trope Workshop (which involves just a bit more than putting the workshop template on the page) and b) It kinda reads like a Google Translate version of the TVT page.

I fixed the first by moving the page into the Workshop.

The second... well, yes, it literally meets the requirement of not being a word-for-word copy of the TVT page, but frankly, it's obviously the TVT page with each individual sentence rewritten -- including a "compare to" link to a page we don't have (which I deleted). It doesn't come off so much as an original treatment of the same idea as a mechanical translation. I've grabbed a copy of it to a local file, I'll work on it if I have a free moment during the day and see what I come up with.