Topic on Talk:Apology Not Accepted
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I did some work here.
A bit of a tip: "In xyz, this happens" is clearer than "XYZ had this happen", because I am clearly signposting that what follows occurs within a work with the "In" keyword. The comma also gives readers an opportunity to take a break, which helps break up long sentences.