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13:49, 4 December 2023. .Looney Toons(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (Well, the grammar is good, yes. In fact, the passage is so well-written that it doesn't sound like Eeveegirl wrote it. It is, as you note...)
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02:59, 4 December 2023. .Robkelk(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (The capitalization, however, is not. And you continue to misspell the word "grammar".)
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19:27, 3 December 2023. .Robkelk(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (@ Eeveegirl, when a moderator gives you grammar advice, we expect that you'll act on it before editing here again. I'm not going to appro...)
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16:39, 3 October 2019. .Looney Toons(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (Might I suggest a few things? Look closely at how other people write sentences in English, either here or elsewhere. Pick up a random mag...)
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19:09, 30 September 2019. .Looney Toons(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (It's not just your grammar -- your contributions are rife with so many errors that I have to ask, are you a native speaker of English?)
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20:06, 22 September 2019. .Looney Toons(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (...but you're backsliding already. I've had to fix markup, spelling, grammar, and more random capitalization errors in your most recent c...)
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01:54, 9 September 2019. .Looney Toons(talk | contribs)commented on "Thank you for your contributions to Mind Control University/Characters..." (... but please take a moment to examine the changes I made to them. Your additions were lacking proper bullet markup, showed a random cap...)
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