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Might I suggest a few things? Look closely at how other people write sentences in English, either here or elsewhere. Pick up a random magazine or book, maybe. And compare how you write to how they write. If your browser offers in-line spellchecking, pay attention to it. If you are young enough, consult an English teacher or professor. It is really very easy to get better at expressing yourself; you don't need to come across sounding like a functional illiterate.