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-{{cleanup|Needs a thorough rewrite to fix numerous grammar/usage issues; the page reads as though it was written by someone who does not speak English, using a phrasebook.}}
+{{cleanup|Needs an edit pass for grammar, usage and style. The page appears to have been written by a troper for whom English was a second language.}}
 {{quote|''When a magical, half-demon superheroine, a timid, gender-ambiguous swordsman, and the self-proclaimed greatest space pirate in the universe get together to read some bad fanfics, this happens. A commentary on just about anything. Rated for language.}}