Talk:Edible Smelling Salts

About this board

Not editable

Ready for Launch?

2
Goo Monster (talkcontribs)

Is it?

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

I'd still like a longer description that wasn't longer for the sake of being longer, but yeah. Launching now.

Needs a better -- or at least larger -- description

5
Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

A trope should be more than eight words long.

Goo Monster (talkcontribs)

What is the description length quota (before launching at least)? I don't see how adding more words would do anything other than dilute what is meaningful, unless it does something worse, like mislead the article reader.

Goo Monster (talkcontribs)

Is it long enough yet? I'd like to get rid of the last sentence or have it changed, incase there might be other ways to imply it was the smell.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

Frankly? Put it back to the way it was. It reads like it's longer just to be longer now.

Goo Monster (talkcontribs)

Does that mean we are launching it? Or do you want someone else to have a go at writing a longer description?

There are no older topics