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* [[Crowning Music of Awesome]] - None in the fic but [[Crowning Moment of Awesome|several moments]] ''demand'' that you open up [[YouTube]] and blast [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZm4zseMok0 Primo Victoria], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5q6skxRLnsI Preliator], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wqDuR1NM7ps Schwarze Sonne] or [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y1a_ikfUico Danger Zone] at full volume.
* [[Crowning Music of Awesome]] - None in the fic but [[Crowning Moment of Awesome|several moments]] ''demand'' that you open up [[YouTube]] and blast [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZm4zseMok0 Primo Victoria], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5q6skxRLnsI Preliator], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wqDuR1NM7ps Schwarze Sonne] or [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y1a_ikfUico Danger Zone] at full volume.
* [[Evil Is Sexy]] - Subject 19 anyone? Well, the girl practically wears revealing clothes.
* [[Evil Is Sexy]] - Subject 19 anyone? Well, the girl practically wears revealing clothes.
** [http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319&view=findpost&p=9199782 Roux], the female Wolf dresses in ''extremely'' revealing clothing (namely a pair of nearly see-through thong panties and that is it).
** [https://web.archive.org/web/20140208165941/http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319 Roux], the female Wolf dresses in ''extremely'' revealing clothing (namely a pair of nearly see-through thong panties and that is it).
* [[Genius Bonus]] - there are some references that make little to no sense unless one has an understanding of science.
* [[Genius Bonus]] - there are some references that make little to no sense unless one has an understanding of science.
* [[Growing the Beard]] - Shelton in the third RP, literally and figuratively.
* [[Growing the Beard]] - Shelton in the third RP, literally and figuratively.
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** Aydin from ''Disruptive Selection'' is a close contender for the "[[Sarcasm Mode|coveted]]" title of most "hated character". Being a relatively flat character who [[Writer on Board|shares his creator's views]] and being a member of a [[Fantasy Counterpart Culture|thinly veiled]] [[Unfortunate Implications|unflattering]] depiction of modern day Native Americans will do that.
** Aydin from ''Disruptive Selection'' is a close contender for the "[[Sarcasm Mode|coveted]]" title of most "hated character". Being a relatively flat character who [[Writer on Board|shares his creator's views]] and being a member of a [[Fantasy Counterpart Culture|thinly veiled]] [[Unfortunate Implications|unflattering]] depiction of modern day Native Americans will do that.
* [[Strangled by the Red String]] - Of the four relationships consummated in the Culeston hotel, only Shelton/Shakila had any sort of foreshadowing.<ref>It was also ironically the only relationship that didn't work out</ref>
* [[Strangled by the Red String]] - Of the four relationships consummated in the Culeston hotel, only Shelton/Shakila had any sort of foreshadowing.<ref>It was also ironically the only relationship that didn't work out</ref>
* [[Unfortunate Implications]] - The Vulpine are ''huge'' offenders. For starters, they are a [[Fantasy Counterpart Culture]] version of modern Native Americans all mashed together into an amalgam. They live in [http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319&view=findpost&p=9189772 horrific] [[Vice City|conditions]], alcoholism and severe poverty are rampant. Furthermore, most of the Vulpine are described as sex-crazed, "[http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319&view=findpost&p=9189680 barely civilized savages]" by [[My Species Doth Protest Too Much|Aydin]]. To top off this mess, Aydin (one of the two Vulpine main characters) is a [[Fantastic Racism|speciesist]] who [[Reptiles Are Abhorrent|hates snakes]] and has no compunctions about attacking his allies if he feels that Aimee is in danger. Thankfully, this is somewhat cushioned by the fact that Aimee is a fairly sympathetic and rounded character.
* [[Unfortunate Implications]] - The Vulpine are ''huge'' offenders. For starters, they are a [[Fantasy Counterpart Culture]] version of modern Native Americans all mashed together into an amalgam. They live in [https://web.archive.org/web/20140208165941/http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319 horrific] [[Vice City|conditions]], alcoholism and severe poverty are rampant. Furthermore, most of the Vulpine are described as sex-crazed, "[https://web.archive.org/web/20140208165941/http://z7.invisionfree.com/thegangoffive/index.php?showtopic=7319 barely civilized savages]" by [[My Species Doth Protest Too Much|Aydin]]. To top off this mess, Aydin (one of the two Vulpine main characters) is a [[Fantastic Racism|speciesist]] who [[Reptiles Are Abhorrent|hates snakes]] and has no compunctions about attacking his allies if he feels that Aimee is in danger. Thankfully, this is somewhat cushioned by the fact that Aimee is a fairly sympathetic and rounded character.
* [[Wangst]] - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs constantly complains about being unloved.
* [[Wangst]] - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs constantly complains about being unloved.



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Shelton: Damn it, he was right. I betrayed them, I never thought of it as betrayal, but I did. And now a bunch of them just died for me. I know they're the enemy, but they trusted me!
Zachary: Fuck them!
Shelton: ...That's probably the best answer anyone could've given.

  • Badass Decay - Meta example. Dr. Keith Bailey from the rebooted Furtopia RP was just as capable with a firearm as any other character. In the Gang of Five RPs, he is pretty much incapable of fighting.
  • Non Sequitur Scene - As Drs. Shelton and Zanasiu run away from the exploding Einstein-Rosen Bridge at the end of the first RP, a winged fox swoops down from the sky and flies them to safety. This moment is never spoken of again.
  • Complete Monster - Professor Eclipse from the Furtopia RPs is an unrepentant sociopath whose main motivation for doing anything is For the Evulz.
  • Creator's Pet - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs fits this trope perfectly. A Mary Sue and a scrappy with a big role, adored by the creator and steals the spotlight.
    • Lupis from the rebooted Furtopia RP is even worse. He literally hijacks the entire story and the plot shifts from a focus on the terrorists to the rogue scientists, who were originally in the background.* Critical Research Failure - Turning a wardrobe into antimatter would not result in it disintegrating. It would result in a massive explosion as the antiparticles of the wardrobe and the atoms of the air around it annihilate each other in a burst of gamma rays.
    • This becomes a Voodoo Shark when the writers try to Hand Wave it by saying it was actually turned into antienergy, not antimatter. And thus completely ignoring what the problem was.
  • Crowning Moment of Awesome - At least one per story/RP.
  • Crowning Music of Awesome - None in the fic but several moments demand that you open up YouTube and blast Primo Victoria, Preliator, Schwarze Sonne or Danger Zone at full volume.
  • Evil Is Sexy - Subject 19 anyone? Well, the girl practically wears revealing clothes.
    • Roux, the female Wolf dresses in extremely revealing clothing (namely a pair of nearly see-through thong panties and that is it).
  • Genius Bonus - there are some references that make little to no sense unless one has an understanding of science.
  • Growing the Beard - Shelton in the third RP, literally and figuratively.
  • God Mode Sue - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs is ludicrously powerful. Several times, he effortlessly slaughters a group of armed terrorists in mere seconds. Oh, by the way, Dragore is six years old!
  • Ho Yay - During Lab 101's escape, Shelton and Kerzach squeeze into a single bathroom stall and cut their way through to the adjacent maintenance rooms. When it's time to leave back through the bathroom, there are people waiting for the bathroom.

Shelton: "What exactly are we going to tell them if they ask why both of us were in the bathroom for so long? I mean, I'm all for the new identity, but I doubt they'll believe we were so inspired by the Exodus that we declared our love for each other."

    • Roux and Aisha are a couple.
  • Holy Shit Quotient - Quite high. Some parts of the RPs and stories get absolutely crazy.
  • Moral Event Horizon - In James' mind, Siberys crossed it in Card of Ten when threatening a child's life to force the king to commit suicide.
  • Take That, Scrappy! - In Ground One Dragore (see below) gets a particularly horrendous Fate Worse Than Death: eaten alive by carnivorous atmosphere but prevented from dying by his nanobots. The endless pain drives him insane.
  • The Scrappy - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs is one of the most hated characters in the entire series.
  • Strangled by the Red String - Of the four relationships consummated in the Culeston hotel, only Shelton/Shakila had any sort of foreshadowing.[1]
  • Unfortunate Implications - The Vulpine are huge offenders. For starters, they are a Fantasy Counterpart Culture version of modern Native Americans all mashed together into an amalgam. They live in horrific conditions, alcoholism and severe poverty are rampant. Furthermore, most of the Vulpine are described as sex-crazed, "barely civilized savages" by Aydin. To top off this mess, Aydin (one of the two Vulpine main characters) is a speciesist who hates snakes and has no compunctions about attacking his allies if he feels that Aimee is in danger. Thankfully, this is somewhat cushioned by the fact that Aimee is a fairly sympathetic and rounded character.
  • Wangst - Dragore from the Furtopia RPs constantly complains about being unloved.
  1. It was also ironically the only relationship that didn't work out