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Ass Pull: Anna pressing "bdown" suddenly causes a Smash Ball to appear, which is conviently needed to stop the skyquake.
Non Sequitur Scene: Master Hand randomly attacks Woe's bus. With his hand.
Designated Hero: Anna and Woe don't really do anything that's remotely heroic, aside from stopping a skyquake and killing Master Hand, which is then balanced by Anna killing Mr. Collins (the LA teacher), and Woe killing Olimar.
Idiot Plot: Need I say more?
Level Breaker: Despite the utter lack of any sort of "drama" in the story, sonicluvr still somehow manages to jar the reader out of the story with Woe's apparent death.
Mary Sue: Woe and Anna are definately this.
- Jerk Sue: These two are complete jerkasses to everyone (not that everyone else are angels, per se).
Narm: The huge amount of spelling and grammar errors, coupled with the ridiculousness of the plot kills any sort of real drama. A shame considering that sonicluvr seems to be attempting to write a Dark Fic. Diabolical Pie seems to be much better at avoiding Narm.
Relationship Sue: Averted. The one thing sonicluvr has done right this whole time was not to force Sonic into a relationship with Anna, instead chosing to make a Palette Swap copy instead, no doubt saving the sanity of countless Sonic fans everywhere.
Possession Sue: Sonic's few appearences seem to suggest that he is this to Woe.

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 * [[Ass Pull]]: Anna pressing "bdown" suddenly causes a Smash Ball to appear, which is conviently needed to stop the skyquake.
-* [[Big Lipped Alligator Moment]]: Master Hand randomly attacks Woe's bus. [[Department of Redundancy Department|With his hand]].
+* [[Non Sequitur Scene]]: Master Hand randomly attacks Woe's bus. [[Department of Redundancy Department|With his hand]].
 * [[Designated Hero]]: Anna and Woe don't really do anything that's remotely heroic, aside from stopping a skyquake and killing Master Hand, which is then balanced by Anna killing Mr. Collins (the LA teacher), and Woe killing Olimar.
 * [[Idiot Plot]]: Need I say more?
 * [[Level Breaker]]: Despite the utter lack of any sort of "drama" in the story, sonicluvr still somehow manages to jar the reader out of the story with Woe's apparent death.
 * [[Mary Sue]]: Woe and Anna are definately this.
-** [[Jerk Sue]]: These two are complete [[Jerkass|jerkasses]] to everyone ([[Crapsack World|not that everyone else are angels, per se]]).
+** [[Jerk Sue]]: These two are complete [[jerkass]]es to everyone ([[Crapsack World|not that everyone else are angels, per se]]).
 * [[Narm]]: The huge amount of spelling and grammar errors, coupled with the ridiculousness of the plot kills any sort of real drama. A shame considering that sonicluvr seems to be attempting to write a [[Dark Fic]]. Diabolical Pie seems to be much better at avoiding Narm.
 * [[Relationship Sue]]: [[Averted Trope|Averted]]. The one thing sonicluvr has done right this whole time was not to force Sonic into a relationship with Anna, instead chosing to make a [[Palette Swap]] copy instead, no doubt saving the sanity of countless Sonic fans everywhere.