Here's the TV Tropes article were this page is based on. Link: https://web.archive.org/web/20121208071219/https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AdaptedOut
For anyone who wants to clean up this page, mainly the description, so they can get an idea on how to clean it.
Does the "Adapted Out" page look good now? I'm not sure if I should add some more or if it's out of the danger zone.
Looks good, but you still need to work on your verb tenses, had to fix a lot of issues with those.
Saw the message, how do I make them consistent? Seen I was focusing on fixing the page links, my horrible grammar, and if it flows right.
Jade, please please please learn something about English grammar and usage. Your original writing is almost unreadable due to random verb tenses, endemic noun-verb disagreement, punctuation ladled over everything like too much pepper and more. We really do appreciate all your effort on the wiki, but it needs to be readable by other people.
Okay, that's why I put it up in the forums. Since I know I'm missing stuff.