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Beta Log 86 (talkcontribs)

I haven't heard much, and I'm still doing some work on it... Let me know, if it's ready to lanuch

Robkelk (talkcontribs)

Nowhere near ready. I've put comments on many parts of the article that need re-phrasing because they make no sense in English.

Beta Log 86 (talkcontribs)

I Know, it's a work in process. I'm not the only one working here

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

Definitely not ready. I just went in and tried to clean a few things up, but there's still a lack of focus -- is it "discrimination against non-adults" or "non-adults are not allowed at all"? And some sentences are still just opaque to me as to what they're supposed to say.