Topic on Talk:"There and Back" Story

There's the seeds of something here

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Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

But it's a strange mix of awful grammar and repetitive buzzwords... if it weren't so on-topic I'd say it'd been created by a travesty generator. There's definitely something to be said for having a trope describing the fundamental "There and Back Again" Story. However, this article isn't saying it yet... or if it is, it's being said so unclearly as to be incomprehensible.

Still, there's some potential here, so with apologies to creator User:SMargan, in whose sandbox this was, and who seems to have abandoned the wiki two and a half months ago after four days' activity, I'll be moving it into the Trope Workshop (yes, despite the current congestion there) so it can be worked on and whipped into shape.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

Raising the flag again for the need to rewrite the main text.

Umbire the Phantom (talkcontribs)

I'll heed that call soon as I possibly can.

Umbire the Phantom (talkcontribs)

And done!

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

Cool! Thank you!