The main text is only two sentences, entirely in italics, which barely identify the work, its author, and where it can be found. We like to see a bit more about a work than "there's this story read it here" -- like, what it's about and why it's of interest to tropers. You have only three tropes where we like to see a minimum of five on a new work page. It's missing the tropelist template. And it's missing almost all of the default categories which would have been added by the works page template had you used the ATT Page Creator, and the one and only category you put on it is the deprecated "fanfic" category which we've been working to replace with "Fan Works", "Fan Works of the 20XXs" and "(work name)/Fan Works" for some years now.
This doesn't mean we don't want the page. But we strongly recommend that you read All The Tropes:Works Page Guidelines to get a good idea what we want in a new works page, and we recommend even more strongly that you use the Page Creator to create a new version of it. Just like the Trope Workshop page (as I noted four months ago), the Page Creator will start you off with a skeleton page that contains all the minimum markup already in place, so all you need to concern yourself with is your content.
Please read the guidelines and resubmit your page using both their advice and the Page Creator, and your submission is far more likely to get approved.
Finally, we apologize for taking so long to get back to you. All of the active admins have been bogged down over the past few weeks and the moderation queue has been getting shortchanged as a result.
-- Looney Toons, admin
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