Domming Daughter Dani

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A 2007 Web Original erotic story by anonymous author Dutchboy, Domming Daughter Dani is a story about a father grooming his daughter to be his (willing) Sex Slave.

Scott is just your normal sophomore college student in the United States in 1989, with a high school girlfriend two years younger, Peggy, waiting for him at home. However, he ends up gravitating to himself Caryn, a fellow colege student who he quickly discovers to basically take everything he delivers to her without complaints. However, when Christmas arrives, he can't go to his parents' home: for some unexplained reason, he is divorced from his parents and will basically sleep on the couch of the Wagner family, his girlfriend parents.

Unexpectedly, one of the Wagner's relatives dies during the holidays, at the same time his girlfriend's little sister Suzie falls ill. Scott takes the "babysitting" job(Suzie is thirteen and in early puberty), and the Wagners leave his little daughter at home with a teenage boy bursting with hormones. Of course, Scott isn't minimally interested on a barely pubescent girl. Suzie, however, is very interested on Scott, and Scott just didn't yet discover a small, almost microscopic aspect of himself, that is about to be amplified to disastrous size by Suzie's actions.

The story is written on Anachronic Order, with the narrator already telling you he groomed his daughter into a willing, living sex toy. It's how he gets to be there where the twists lay.

See the story here (Warning: very disturbing, very NSFW). Author Dutchboy notes on his page he received angry e-mails of people that thought the whole thing was a real, that must give you an idea of how twisted it is.

Tropes used in Domming Daughter Dani include:
  • Absence Makes the Heart Go Yonder: Both Scott and Peggy cheat on each other thanks to Scott living on the campus most of the year.
  • Anachronic Order: The story starts in the late eighties, but takes a long detour for Caryn to tell Scott bout her abusive childhood.
  • The Bad Guy Wins: Scott gets away with everything and implies at the end he will train his stepson with Olga to be just like him. He does admit he feels hurt of not being able to be close to Dani, but this is little damage compared to the awful stuff we see him do.
  • Bait and Switch: Early on, Scott talks about power shifting and how "daddy's little girl" turn into "vindictive middle-aged bitch", seemingly indicating when Dani will turn on him. He gets on the run fearing Allison will bring the police on him once Dani becomes a porn actress and theoretically will not be hurt by him being arrested, and Dani never turns on him..
  • Brains and Bondage: Scott is a very smart engineer with a liking for bondage.
  • Coitus Uninterruptus: The narrative in the novel is uninterrupted, but Scott tells Caryn told her backstory between and during sexual acts.
  • Domestic Abuser: Surprisingly absolutely nobody which reads the story until that point, Scott is physically abusive towards Caryn if she annoys him. And as a Extreme Doormat, she cares more about keeping appearances when the beating is done and her anger is over.
  • Extreme Doormat:
    • Caryn takes all the abuse a lot of people deliver to her without any reaction. It is eventually revealed her father groomed her to be like that.
    • Dani is even worse thanks to her grooming, but that also mean she receives well less abuse because her default reaction to anything Scott orders is to comply once her training is complete.
  • Foregone Conclusion: Scott tells you by the third sentence Dani's mom dies of a bacterial infection. He doesn't say who it is though.
  • Generation Xerox: Enforced. Scott tries to groom Dany into being exactly like Caryn, while trying to also bond with her emotionally like he did unintentionally with Suzie.
  • Insistent Terminology: Adult Maxy constantly calls Scott, well, that. His close personal circle calls him Skip instead.
  • Happily Adopted: Peggy by the Wagners, as result of a faulty fertility exam. Suzie is their younger biological child, conceived because they didn't think sex would lead to babies after said exam.
  • Hypocrite: Scott is very angry when he discovers Peggy is cheating on him, despite cheating on her with Caryn. To be fair, Suzie does mentions her parents also know that and were basically lying to Scott's face every time they met, that increases his rage.
  • Lack of Empathy: Before leaving Scott's house, Allison tells him he has no empathy for anyone and can only pretend to be a good guy.
  • Locked Out of the Loop: Caryn's uncle, Wallis, has no idea his own brother is a incestuous rapist creep. As result, when he comes to visit everyone behaves normally around him.
  • Nightmare Fetishist: Scott doesn't discover or is told spontaneously by Caryn about her father grooming her. He basically demands her too because he is turned on by it, until he is certain she isn't lying.
  • Pyrrhic Victory: Scott claims escaping into Kosovo was this: he lost his wife(by disease), his daughters, and his country(we never see him being patriotic at all).
  • Parental Incest:
    • Caryn was sexually abused by her dad, or so she says.
    • Scott is incestous towards Dani, modelling his own brainwashing programming based on his experiences with Suzie and Caryn telling her what her father did.
    • Scott is similarly incestuous towards Allison, but the fact she wasn't groomed by him from the cradle makes her well more rebellious and in the end forces him to run away. From the United States of America.
  • Posthumous Character: Scott mentions off-handedly that Cliff, Caryn's first boyfriend, died of a heart attack on his 30th birthday.
  • Precocious Crush: Suzie has a crush on Scott when she is six years younger than him.
  • Riddle for the Ages: Scott never explains what is up with his parents that they seemingly cut all ties with him before the story started. He tells you they're divorced, but forcing your son to live by himself in college sounds pretty harsh and not related to any possible cause for divorce at all.
  • Sensual Slav: By Scott's description, his new girlfriend Olga is this.
  • Unreliable Narrator: Scott mentions questioning Caryn repeatedly about her past because he doubts she is telling the whole truth. One must notice he never sees Caryn being incestuous with her father: he is always told to, by her. What makes him even more unreliable as the second-hand narrator.
  • Unwitting Instigator of Doom: Maxy thinks Scott grew up in a decent adult and is most definitely not a child rapist when she gives him custody of Allison.
  • Villain Protagonist: Scott starts the story as a cheater and only descends further and further, though he stops short of something more than cold-blooded sexual torture on a child, that is already pretty bad. He seems incapable of one shed of altruism.
  • You Called Me "X" - It Must Be Serious: Scott realizes there is something more than attrition between Caryn and her dad when Caryn angrily calls him "Scott". Until there, every other character called him "Skip".
  • Your Cheating Heart:
    • Discovering Peggy cheated on him is what finally pushes Scott in breaking up with her.
    • After they're married, Caryn cheats on Scott because he no longer treats her like a Sex Slave, what makes him very upset until she tells him what he is up and begins to abuse her again.
  • Walking Spoiler: Allison's existence isn't revealed to the audience until the middle of the story, at the same time as it is for the Scott.