Topic on Talk:Loot Boxes

Summary by Robkelk

Launched after a grammar pass.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

Calling this one ready to go out into the wide world. Any objections?

GethN7 (talkcontribs)

None from me.

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

No objections from me.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

It's been more than a day. Launching.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

On second thought, no. The main text needs a lot more cleanup than I thought it did on first glance. Let me take care of that first.

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

Agree, since I just did a quick tweaking and cleaning, found out that there's some mistakes with the entries, like they don't sound right being read aloud. (Sorry, about changing my answer).

GethN7 (talkcontribs)

Well, I can't fault giving it more polish first, please do.

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

Does it look good? Since I was doing a bit of the polishing before GethN7 replied. I even went a bit overboard, I put it under the examples of various games and even gave it a Laconic page (I don't like adding laconic or those extra goodness to under construction tropes, since it's due to suppose a trope doesn't make it out of the workshop?)

Umbire the Phantom (talkcontribs)

Most tropes do make it out provided you put in more than the bare minimum effort, in my limited experience, and you've gone well beyond that. It wouldn't hurt to add subpages once you think you're far along enough.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

I just started a major rewrite of the main text, which kind of read like a bot wrote part of it at random. (Sorry, Jade, but it did -- and parts still do.)

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

That's fine, since the descriptions usually give me trouble. Hopefully, the examples are okay or at least, passable.

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

Hey, is the page passable? I wanna know so I can start linking the trope page to other pages.

Umbire the Phantom (talkcontribs)

LT's on vacation, but @Robkelk and a few others might be able to help.

Robkelk (talkcontribs)

I just did a pass for grammar errors, and I think I caught them all. The most common fix was getting plural subjects and singular verbs to agree in number.

Since that was the only hurdle to jump, I'm launching the trope.

Jade Shauni (talkcontribs)

Okay, I was just asking to make sure everything's been smoothed out, Robkelk.

Robkelk (talkcontribs)

No worries.