Topic on User talk:ArtsyGirl

It's lacking some necessary markup, but more importantly, it's a grammatic mess and almost unreadable as written. Please feel free to revise it and resubmit it. I've quoted it below for your convenience, as it has been languishing in the moderation queue over the holiday weekend:

[https://fandomania.com/dvd-review-alice-in-wonderland-1966-bbc-television-play/ This article about the 1966 television film] of Alice in Wonderland mistakes it as a television play, The reviewer hasn't even seen the TV movie before, however a television play for Alice in Wonderland was a 1965 episode from the BBC television series ''The Wednesday Play'' that was broadcasted a year before the TV film.

-- Looney Toons, admin

@Labster @Looney Toons @GethN7 @Robkelk @QuestionableSanity @Derivative @SelfCloak

Honestly, a couple of comma/period swaps is all it would take to "save" this and make it more coherent.

So, sorry about I'll revise and resumbmit it. However, I'll move it to the film section.

I had to reject a few recent edits because you forgot bullet points and left text without being spaced properly. I recommend using the preview function before submitting your edits to make sure it all looks proper beforehand from now on.