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"As most things do, it started with sex. Of course, there was more to it than that, but the thing everyone remembers is that there was sex involved at one point or another."

Egg Belly is a Mahou Sensei Negima fanfic by Cloverfield, focusing on the relationship between a slightly older Konoka and Setsuna, and how, through a series of magical events, Konoka manages to get pregnant. It's that kind of fic.

Known amongst the fandom for being funny, cute and a little bit sexy, Egg Belly starts off with slow but cranks into gear once it gets a few chapters in. A very long fic, it updates infrequently but with big chapters, even if they sometimes end too abruptly for reader satisfaction. The story has eleven chapters so far.

Tropes used in Egg Belly include:

A Pactio Did It: Pregnancy is apparently a rare side effect of permanent pactios. Whoops.
Bifauxnen
But I Can't Be Pregnant: Konoka in chapter ten. Justified because she's never had sex with a man, the pregnancy was a result of the permanent pactio.
Calling the Old Man Out: Chapter 11 has shades of this for a few characters.
Cerebus Syndrome
Cheese-Eating Surrender Monkeys: Ku Fei, while she was pretending to be a french waiter. For some reason.
Cliff Hanger: Chapters can sometimes end rather abruptly and in a very dramatic manner, much to the distress of readers. Chapter eleven is a good example.
Date Peepers
Did You Just Have Sex
Girls Love
Glamour Failure: Setsuna has some issues with her outward appearance.
- Grey Eyes Mean Lust: When Setsuna gets horny, her eyes turn to what Konoka has described as "smoke".
Gratuitous French: After dressing up as a french waiter, Ku Fei spends the rest of the fic littering her speech with random french phrases.
Head-Tiltingly Kinky: Chapter six has been described as "mind expanding yuri".
Heroic Albino: Setsuna.
Homosexual Reproduction
Load-Bearing Boss: Evangeline's resort collapses around her when her magic backfires on her in chapter 9.
The Matchmaker: While they're already a couple at the time, Konoemon acts as this for Konaka and Setsuna.
Not Safe for Work: in some places, a fair bit. Read this one at home.
Overprotective Dad: Eishun to Konoka. Justified, how would you react if you found out that your daughters bodyguard got her pregnant at the age of 17?
Pervert Revenge Mode: Konoka towards Chamo, after latter is found among underwear and cought during Konokas... "me time"
Porn With Plot: A surprisingly cute example that manages to combine warm fuzzies with lemony goodness.
Precision F-Strike: Konoka. Didn't See That Coming.
- Followed immediately by a Cluster F-Bomb.
Schoolgirl Lesbians
Strange Minds Think Alike: When Konaka says she needs to talk to them (about her pregnancy), Setsuna and Eishun go through the exact same train of thought.
Surprise Pregnancy: Very surprising.
Teen Pregnancy: Konoka is her final year of high school here, but it still counts.
Throwing Down the Gauntlet: Setsuna in chapter 11.
Warm and Fuzzy Feeling
Wham Episode: Chapter 10

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 Known amongst the fandom for being funny, [[Warm and Fuzzy Feeling|cute]] and a little bit [[Lemon Fic|sexy]], ''Egg Belly'' starts off with slow but [[Cerebus Syndrome|cranks into gear]] once it gets a few chapters in. A very long fic, it updates infrequently but with big chapters, even if they sometimes end [[Cliff Hanger|too abruptly]] for reader satisfaction. The story has eleven chapters so far.
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 *  {{spoiler|[[A Wizard Did It|A Pactio Did It]]: Pregnancy is apparently a rare side effect of permanent pactios. Whoops.}}
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 * [[Calling the Old Man Out]]: Chapter 11 has shades of this for a few characters.
 * [[Cerebus Syndrome]]
-* [[Cheese Eating Surrender Monkeys]]: Ku Fei, while she was pretending to be a french waiter. [[Makes Sense in Context|For some reason]].
+* [[Cheese-Eating Surrender Monkeys]]: Ku Fei, while she was pretending to be a french waiter. [[Makes Sense in Context|For some reason]].
 * [[Cliff Hanger]]: Chapters can sometimes end rather abruptly and in a very dramatic manner, much to the distress of readers. Chapter eleven is a good example.
 * [[Date Peepers]]
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 ** [[Red Eyes Take Warning|Grey Eyes Mean Lust]]: When Setsuna gets horny, her eyes turn to what Konoka has described as "smoke".
 * [[Gratuitous French]]: After dressing up as a french waiter, Ku Fei spends the rest of the fic littering her speech with random french phrases.
-* [[Head Tiltingly Kinky]]: Chapter six has been described as "mind expanding yuri".
+* [[Head-Tiltingly Kinky]]: Chapter six has been described as "mind expanding yuri".
 * [[Heroic Albino]]: Setsuna.
 *  {{spoiler|[[Homosexual Reproduction]]}}
-* [[Load Bearing Boss]]: Evangeline's resort collapses around her when  {{spoiler|her magic backfires on her in chapter 9.}}
+* [[Load-Bearing Boss]]: Evangeline's resort collapses around her when  {{spoiler|her magic backfires on her in chapter 9.}}
 * [[The Matchmaker]]: While they're already a couple at the time, {{spoiler|Konoemon}} acts as this for Konaka and Setsuna.
 * [[Not Safe for Work]]: in some places, a fair bit. Read this one at home.
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 * [[Pervert Revenge Mode]]: Konoka towards Chamo, after latter is found among underwear and cought during Konokas... [[A Date With Rosie Palms|"me time"]]
 * [[Porn With Plot]]: A surprisingly cute example that manages to combine [[Warm and Fuzzy Feeling|warm fuzzies]] with [[Lemon Fic|lemony goodness]].
-* [[Precision F Strike]]: {{spoiler|Konoka}}. [[Didn't See That Coming]].
+* [[Precision F-Strike]]: {{spoiler|Konoka}}. [[Didn't See That Coming]].
-** Followed immediately by a [[Cluster F Bomb]].
+** Followed immediately by a [[Cluster F-Bomb]].
 * [[Schoolgirl Lesbians]]
 * [[Strange Minds Think Alike]]: When Konaka says she needs to talk to them ({{spoiler|about her pregnancy}}), Setsuna and Eishun go through the exact same train of thought.