Topic on Talk:Alternate Realm Boon

I just spent an hour or so going through this page and correcting every grammar and usage error I spotted as well as breaking up its excessive supply of long, rambling run-on sentences into something that could be read by humans. After literally years, it may well finally be launchable. Could folks please read through it and give a yea/nay vote? Thanks!

Pinging the Usual Suspects: @Agiletek @GentlemensDame883 @Goo Monster @HeneryVII @HornyLikeIAmA14YearOldGirl @Lequinni‎ @RivetVermin @Umbire the Phantom @Utini501 @Labster @Looney Toons @GethN7 @Robkelk @QuestionableSanity @Derivative @SelfCloak

(makes an edit pass: fixes a typo and some grammar glitches, changes one word in the "Rayearth" example)

Looks good to me. Vote to launch.

Definitely a good Trope, vote to launch.

Well, that's three votes in favor. And if I'm not mistaken, this is the first of Kuma's proposed tropes to actually make it to prime-time. Go Kuma.

Okay, launched, and I'm in the middle of populating the backlinks from those works we have pages for. But I need to go make dinner, and I have an appointment to keep later; I might not complete the task tonight.

And I completed them in between waiting for things to cook. All done now.

Thank you for your work Looney Toons. I am sorry for not working on it sooner; it's just what you said from a while ago affected me deeply and I wanted to get better especially to correct my mistakes on the Workshop pages. I have Grammarly and that has help here and there but I also wasted money where I tried to get lessons on my problems with my writing but they suggested I needed a proofreader rather than a teacher. I am going to start working on the pages this week to the best of my ability. I might try to hire a proofreader but I might as well do it on my own. I hope that this message doesn't cause you any ire and I wish you a great day. Thank you for reading.

Sorry, been a rough few days, so I couldn't get caught up till now. I'll go take a look. Video isn't working for me though; might want to put a caption if no suitable alternative is available.

It works for me and I think its something on your end. I am also wondering how you can add a subtitle to an embedded video?

There's a </div> tag at the end of an embedded video. Add <br/>This is the caption under the video. right before it.

Thanks, @Looney Toons!