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== [[Live-Action TV]] ==
* In ''[[Denkou Choujin Gridman]]'', Naoto with the use of the [[Transformation Trinket|Acceptor]] and the computer made of junk parts called Junk can fuses with the Hyper Police, Gridman, to fight Kaiju
** '''''MOD:''' I need help figuring out what this one is supposed to say. Does the Computer World cause chaos, or do Kaiju cause chaos in the Computer World, or do Kaiju cause chaos in the real world until they're fought in the Computer World? "He has access to help": Who is "he"? Does he use that access, or is it just sitting there doing nothing? "with Yuka and Ippa's assistance": who do they assist - Junk or "he"? Are the Assists Weapons the assistance, or is making the Assists Weapons the assistance? Overall, this example needs a complete re-write.''
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