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* [[Driving Question]]: ''"Why is The Thousand Sunny deserted? What happened to the crew? And how are the Heart Pirates involved?"''
* [[Driving Question]]: ''"Why is The Thousand Sunny deserted? What happened to the crew? And how are the Heart Pirates involved?"''
* [[The Faceless]]: The Disinfector is never seen without his hazard suit, {{spoiler|until Chapter 21 where he is [[The Reveal|revealed]] to be Trafalgar Law}}
* [[The Faceless]]: The Disinfector is never seen without his hazard suit, {{spoiler|until Chapter 21 where he is [[The Reveal|revealed]] to be Trafalgar Law}}
* [[Five Man Band]]
* [[Five-Man Band]]
** [[The Hero]]: The Disinfector
** [[The Hero]]: The Disinfector
** [[The Lancer]]: Gurnarde
** [[The Lancer]]: Gurnarde
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** Mr. Suesse's [[Heroic BSOD]] starts off this way.
** Mr. Suesse's [[Heroic BSOD]] starts off this way.
** {{spoiler|Also used disturbingly in a flashback. Trafalgar Law, The Surgeon of Death, breaks down laughing at the irony his [[Badass Nickname]] when he fails a critical operation and kills his patient. It also marks the beginning of his personality shift into The Disinfector.}}
** {{spoiler|Also used disturbingly in a flashback. Trafalgar Law, The Surgeon of Death, breaks down laughing at the irony his [[Badass Nickname]] when he fails a critical operation and kills his patient. It also marks the beginning of his personality shift into The Disinfector.}}
* [[Lemony Narrator]]: Who also happens to be a bit of a [[Firstperson Smartass]].
* [[Lemony Narrator]]: Who also happens to be a bit of a [[First-Person Smartass]].
* [[Mary Sue]]: The entire story revolves around the idea that one of these messed up the [[One Piece]] world.
* [[Mary Sue]]: The entire story revolves around the idea that one of these messed up the [[One Piece]] world.
* [[Meaningful Name]] / [[Punny Name]]: The author ''loves'' these
* [[Meaningful Name]] / [[Punny Name]]: The author ''loves'' these
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** [[God Mode Sue|Lance D. Imba]]
** [[God Mode Sue|Lance D. Imba]]
* [[Mary Sue Hunter]]: The Disinfector is introduced as one.
* [[Mary Sue Hunter]]: The Disinfector is introduced as one.
* [[May December Romance]]: Subverted. Mar clearly finds the at least 20 years older {{spoiler|Trafalgar Law}} attractive until she realises that he's likely around the same age as her father. [[Squick]] ensues.
* [[May-December Romance]]: Subverted. Mar clearly finds the at least 20 years older {{spoiler|Trafalgar Law}} attractive until she realises that he's likely around the same age as her father. [[Squick]] ensues.
* [[More Than Mind Control]]: {{spoiler|Squall claims to have been ''happy'' in Madelyn's thrall, and exploits her power to ensure he can stay that way.}}
* [[More Than Mind Control]]: {{spoiler|Squall claims to have been ''happy'' in Madelyn's thrall, and exploits her power to ensure he can stay that way.}}
* [[My God What Have I Done]]: {{spoiler|Madelyn's horrified when her power gets exploited to nearly kill the man she claims to love.}}
* [[My God, What Have I Done?]]: {{spoiler|Madelyn's horrified when her power gets exploited to nearly kill the man she claims to love.}}
* [[Narrative Profanity Filter]]: It's something of a running joke that the narrator is forced to to do this because the author wants to avoid raising the rating of the fic.
* [[Narrative Profanity Filter]]: It's something of a running joke that the narrator is forced to to do this because the author wants to avoid raising the rating of the fic.
* [[Original Character]]: Loads of them. Some are one-off [[Parody Sue|Parody Sues]], but the fic deliberately makes a point of using only [[Original Characters]] to tell the story.
* [[Original Character]]: Loads of them. Some are one-off [[Parody Sue|Parody Sues]], but the fic deliberately makes a point of using only [[Original Characters]] to tell the story.
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* [[Shout Out]] / [[Take That]]:
* [[Shout Out]] / [[Take That]]:
** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[Naruto|Kimimaro]]"
** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[Naruto|Kimimaro]]"
** Admiral Imba is described as looking like the twin of a certain "[[White Haired Pretty Boy|pretty white-haired boy]]" from [[Bleach|another manga series]].
** Admiral Imba is described as looking like the twin of a certain "[[White-Haired Pretty Boy|pretty white-haired boy]]" from [[Bleach|another manga series]].
* [[Snicket Warning Label]]: See the page quote above.
* [[Snicket Warning Label]]: See the page quote above.
* [[Speak Ill of the Dead]]: Marie discovers three graves; though one is mostly untouched, the middle has been destroyed to the point no sign of who it stands for remains, and the last's epitath is partly destroyed, along with {{spoiler|one of its blades stolen}}.
* [[Speak Ill of the Dead]]: Marie discovers three graves; though one is mostly untouched, the middle has been destroyed to the point no sign of who it stands for remains, and the last's epitath is partly destroyed, along with {{spoiler|one of its blades stolen}}.
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** And then subverted later when it turns out [[Wrong Genre Savvy|her guess was a bit off]].
** And then subverted later when it turns out [[Wrong Genre Savvy|her guess was a bit off]].
* [[That Was the Last Entry]]: Robin's [[Apocalyptic Log]] in chapter 7.
* [[That Was the Last Entry]]: Robin's [[Apocalyptic Log]] in chapter 7.
* [[The Reason You Suck Speech]]: In Chapter 23's [[Flash Back|Flashbacks]], one gets delivered to Monkey D. Madelyn, brutally shutting down her claims that {{spoiler|she only wanted to make Law ''happy''}}.
* [["The Reason You Suck" Speech]]: In Chapter 23's [[Flash Back|Flashbacks]], one gets delivered to Monkey D. Madelyn, brutally shutting down her claims that {{spoiler|she only wanted to make Law ''happy''}}.
* [[Third Person Person]]: Two of them.
* [[Third Person Person]]: Two of them.
* [[Tragic Keepsake]]: The Straw Hat.
* [[Tragic Keepsake]]: The Straw Hat.

Revision as of 10:41, 9 January 2014

 "Now before I go any further, I should mention that if you are looking to read one of those stories where a girl from the real world falls into a fantasy world and maybe falls in love with one of the characters there, you are probably looking at the wrong story."


Marie D. Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age! is an on-going One Piece fanfic Deconstruction Fic by Phalanx

Self-described as "A very different take on the typical OC-falls-into-OP story, deconstructed with a macabre twist".

The story follows the titular character's adventures after falling into the One Piece world. It also manages to subvert the Self Insert story right at the beginning by bringing Mar's parents along for the ride and having her end up alone on the Straw-Hat's deserted ship.

What ensues is a darkly humorous story that deconstructs the hell out of almost every fanfic cliche, all the while building a suspenseful mystery over the fate of the Straw-Hats.

Some parts can be quite disturbing.


Marie D. Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age! provides examples of: