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* [[First Law of Gender Bending]]: When it kicks in it marks the point where pretty much the last of any [[Original Flavor]] ''Ranma'' is abandoned.
* [[First Law of Gender Bending]]: When it kicks in it marks the point where pretty much the last of any [[Original Flavor]] ''Ranma'' is abandoned.
** If I were a male character in this series I'd be very [[Nightmare Fuel|worried]] indeed. Especially given the personality changes that seem to occur. Several mortally-wounded agents when given the choice have declined being turned, for just such a reason -- they might lose themselves, and there's no going back afterwards.
** If I were a male character in this series I'd be very [[Nightmare Fuel|worried]] indeed. Especially given the personality changes that seem to occur. Several mortally-wounded agents when given the choice have declined being turned, for just such a reason -- they might lose themselves, and there's no going back afterwards.
*** It's noted (with some humor) in-universe that males who undergo conversion into succubae are ''far'' more prone to becoming excessively feminine. One of Ranma's "daughters" even comments that "it seems like when they lose their penis, they get a makeup kit".
* [[Foe Yay]]: In addition to beating each other to hell, DarkStar shot [[Worthy Opponent|Galina]] in the [[What Do You Mean Its Not Symbolic|crotch repeatedly]], has [[Daydream Surprise|daydreams]] about fighting her again. It's suggested Galina for her part cut off DarkStar's tail (why else would a being that [[Good Thing You Can Heal|can heal]] even bother to bandage a minor wound) and seems to be obsessive to the point of scaring her "men".
* [[Foe Yay]]: In addition to beating each other to hell, DarkStar shot [[Worthy Opponent|Galina]] in the [[What Do You Mean Its Not Symbolic|crotch repeatedly]], has [[Daydream Surprise|daydreams]] about fighting her again. It's suggested Galina for her part cut off DarkStar's tail (why else would a being that [[Good Thing You Can Heal|can heal]] even bother to bandage a minor wound) and seems to be obsessive to the point of scaring her "men".
* [[Fountain of Youth]] -- {{spoiler|Pluto}} gets hit with one of these leaving her younger than the rest of the Senshi, and also {{spoiler|Nabiki}} who is turned into the youngest member of the brood..
* [[Fountain of Youth]] -- {{spoiler|Pluto}} gets hit with one of these leaving her younger than the rest of the Senshi, and also {{spoiler|Nabiki}} who is turned into the youngest member of the brood..
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** Depends, she might be more [[Villain with Good Publicity]]. She's only popped up once.
** Depends, she might be more [[Villain with Good Publicity]]. She's only popped up once.
* [[Non-Answer]]: When Ranma asks what gender Cecilia was as a human, she replies "[[Gender Blender Name|My name was Casey]]"
* [[Non-Answer]]: When Ranma asks what gender Cecilia was as a human, she replies "[[Gender Blender Name|My name was Casey]]"
* [[No Kill Like Overkill]]: A tenet of WIC planning and operations, enthusiastically embraced by Ranma and her brood, even in non-military/non-lethal contexts.
{{quote|Two is one, one is none.}}
* [[No Sense of Personal Space]]: Succubae seem to have [[No Sense of Personal Space]] when instigating interaction (including humans) especially within their brood, but when it is humans doing the instigating it is [[Hates Being Touched]] (except for the [[Cooldown Hug|crying]] succubus [[All There in the Manual]] rule)
* [[No Sense of Personal Space]]: Succubae seem to have [[No Sense of Personal Space]] when instigating interaction (including humans) especially within their brood, but when it is humans doing the instigating it is [[Hates Being Touched]] (except for the [[Cooldown Hug|crying]] succubus [[All There in the Manual]] rule)
* [[No Loves Intersect]] -- [[Horny Devils|Succubae]] are [[Our Demons Are Different|actually]] strictly [[Happily Married|monogomous]].
* [[No Loves Intersect]] -- [[Horny Devils|Succubae]] are [[Our Demons Are Different|actually]] strictly [[Happily Married|monogomous]].
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** [[Badass]] [[Moe]] Morrison—Green another case of [[Curtains Match the Window]].
** [[Badass]] [[Moe]] Morrison—Green another case of [[Curtains Match the Window]].
* [[Tempting Fate]]: When Agent Morrison wonders how he'd feel if he was turned into a Succubus, there are no prizes for guessing what happens in the next chapter. Also {{spoiler|Nabiki}} says she isn't a real target, a rare slip for a normally [[Genre Savvy]] character.
* [[Tempting Fate]]: When Agent Morrison wonders how he'd feel if he was turned into a Succubus, there are no prizes for guessing what happens in the next chapter. Also {{spoiler|Nabiki}} says she isn't a real target, a rare slip for a normally [[Genre Savvy]] character.
* [[There Is No Kill Like Overkill]]: Leveling a mountain to get rid of an enemy base.
* [[There Is No Kill Like Overkill]]: A tenet of WIC planning and operations, enthusiastically embraced by Ranma and her brood, even in non-military/non-lethal contexts:
** Leveling a mountain to get rid of an enemy base.
** Misako and Morgan's guns
** Weapon design, especially Misako and Morgan's guns
* [[Third Law of Gender Bending]]: Hammered into the ground with all the subtlety of a drunken elephant on a moped trying to navigate the East Kilbride traffic system. It's [[Lampshaded|commented on]] too many times to count that [[Gender Bender]] Succubae are girlier than cis-female Succubae.
** Generally planning for ''anything''. If it's worth doing, it's worth massively overdoing.
{{quote|Two is one, one is none.}}
* [[Third Law of Gender Bending]]: Hammered into the ground with all the subtlety of a drunken elephant on a moped trying to navigate the East Kilbride traffic system. It's [[Lampshaded|commented on]] (often humorously) too many times to count that [[Gender Bender]] Succubae are girlier than cis-female Succubae. One of Ranma's "daughters" even comments to the effect that "it seems like when they lose their penis, they get a makeup kit".
* [[Those Two Guys]]: Naoko and Sam, Sunshine's schoolfriends.
* [[Those Two Guys]]: Naoko and Sam, Sunshine's schoolfriends.
* [[Transplanted Character Fic]]: On the ''Ranma'' side. The ''Sailor Moon'' stuff is clearly the same characters, but the ''Ranma'' stuff would not be recognizable as such with a few changed names
* [[Transplanted Character Fic]]: On the ''Ranma'' side. The ''Sailor Moon'' stuff is clearly the same characters, but the ''Ranma'' stuff would not be recognizable as such with a few changed names

Revision as of 18:08, 2 December 2021

Well, this is new.

The Return by Sunshine Temple is ostensibly a Ranma ½/Sailor Moon Crossover fic throwing Ranma and the Senshi into the world of secret government agencies, ancient conspiracies and Eldritch Abominations. It is very much of the Darker and Edgier school of ficcing.

Fans of Ranma ½ would be best served to treat it as fic featuring characters merely with the same name and a few surface similarities, as it strips virtually all canon except Ranma's curse (and even that doesn't last long), though the Senshi fare somewhat better. It stands on its own as an excellent work of original fiction, however, and no previous knowledge of the original series is required (some may argue it helps).

The story begins when Sailor Pluto seeks to replace a suddenly dead Tuxedo Mask[1] with the nearest available candidate for Prince of Earth, Ranma Saotome. Unfortunately Ranma's curse activates in the middle of the rite, and what Pluto gets instead is the new incarnation of a very female Succubus Princess of Earth, Sailor DarkStar. Predictably, Ranma is less than thrilled by this turn of events. Shortly afterward he is recruited into a shadowy organization by secret agent Tendo, Kasumi Tendo, kicking off a twisting tale which may lead Ranma and the Senshi to save the world. Or destroy it.

Imagine Torchwood meets The X-Files, with a dash of Being Human.

Between 2017 and 2018 Sunshine Temple performed a complete rewrite of The Return, breaking it out into five separate stories:

In a note at the end of Blood Debts the author suggests that there will be further stories in The Return although none have yet appeared. Be aware that there have been a few substantial changes in characterization and plot, and not all the tropes listed below will apply to the revised version.

As of late 2021 the original version of The Return (begun in 2002 and last updated in December 2018) clocks in at nearly three-quarters of a million words across 39 chapters. The revised version has nearly a million words spanning 69 chapters in five stories.

By the same author is And If That Don't Work?, a, Evangelion alt-fic which does much the same thing with that franchise.

Tropes used in The Return (fanfic) include:

""Oh, just wondering how big that brain of yours is ... just thinking about how many explosives I could fit up there."".

Two is one, one is none.

  1. Assassinated by the agent of an unknown third party
  2. See YMMV for Genius Bonus.